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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Soon Do not grieve for me my sweet, Stay safe and warm your abode. Taste the good and bittersweet, Soon I take the homeward road. I will see you in the spring, When cherry blossoms line the path. Wrapping us in beauties cling And radiance of the aftermath. Let your mind a moment play O'er these written words I write, And they will warm you in a way, That only words of love can light It's what I do to keep me sane, To help me wait the morrow. I often dream where we have lain, To lift the weight of sorrow. Soon my arms will form an arc, Caressing you with finger tips Peel away the lonely dark, Kiss the solid of your lips. I can not wait the coming goal, To hold the other half my soul. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is my favorite of all of your poems. I'm so glad you posted it, it should definitly be in the book Liz |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I was waiting for you to post.  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, this Heavenly verse enchants the senses...what a heady concoction! Most lovely... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Soon my arms will form an arc, Caressing you with finger tips Peel away the lonely dark, Kiss the solid of your lips. I can not wait the coming goal, To hold the other half my soul. ........ A Seymour Classic, this!!! Wonderful heartfelt words here... Regards, sudhir. Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nicely done. Wonderful poetry. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
why ya make me wait so long baby... LOL  this one is perfect to reflect your amazing talent and gift of perfect rhyme. now give me more ... later sweet-SY-gator jm |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
This really is a lovely poem reflecting a lovely thought. Well done. Pete |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, part of this piece sounded as if they had come from the 1800's...when writing was a part of one's life, and postal letters were anticipated so much... Darn, you're good! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I can only humbly thank one and all who voted this a plus. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy, this sweet heart felt poem brought tears to my eyes...it is so lovely. I'm so glad you posted it so I could give it a vote. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you so much. *L* Sy |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Glad to see you made it here, Sy....and in such style! My vote is in... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah! At last...a Sy poem! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Again, love your word choices. I think it was the cherry blossoms and solid lips that did it for me.  Thanks again.Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My friend~ PERFECT ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is lovely! ***VOTE*** -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Once again I thank you and *L* to all |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Tenderly touching, Seymour and beautifully written! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Simple perfection Sy... Siiiiiigh... K |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
I could ditto all of the above and still not have words to say how beautiful this is |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I'm glad I found this beautiful piece now I can vote. Well Done Seymour It's been too many nights of being with to now be suddenly without "Jewel" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, severn, Corazon and Dark Angel, I thank you all for your votes. *L* |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, WOW, sometimes I don't know if I could possibly put words to how things affect me, but your poem I deeply enjoyed in my heart, thank you so much for posting it. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Sentimental and lively, that's all i can say about your poem. I will vote. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"I can not wait the coming goal, To hold the other half my soul." love this...... dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
For all those I have not thanked I do so now. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful work of words and done with such style...voting |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is beautiful..forgive me for my words are lacking...this poem is MORE than beautiful. ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome & Poutprincess, Thank you both so much for your votes. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Perfection, of the purest kind. Not only does love flow from your words but joy in spirit of truth. This is a piece of work! marcy |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So beautiful - could you repost this one? |
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