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Dark Angel
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0 posted 06-26-2000 09:39 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

blankly
a dash replaces
    letters, words
      and spaces left unfilled

unsaid
   same old stories
    nevertheless ..
board the express train
            of thought
  conveying ideas and
                   meaning
    
this page
a surface blank
    of nothingness
                of naught
    I, an informant of nil

I mark a pause,
   a stroke, a line
     a row of unwritten words


Angel of Darkness
June2000



Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 06-26-2000 09:45 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Don't believe I've seen this one before DA.

'express train of thought'.....I like this one  
Not A Poet
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2 posted 06-26-2000 01:40 PM       View Profile for Not A Poet   Email Not A Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Not A Poet's Home Page   View IP for Not A Poet

I like this one too. And I agree, "express train of thought" is a nice image.

Pete
Dark Angel
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3 posted 06-26-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Angel and Pete, thanks so much for your lovely replies.   *hugs*

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

Colin
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4 posted 06-26-2000 05:51 PM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Yep, "express train of thought" is a goody   So's the poem... nice and thought provoking, I like!

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 06-29-2000 07:21 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you so much Eric  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

AVANTI
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE


6 posted 06-29-2000 08:39 AM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

i like you style as well as your formatting style...
good poem...

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Poet deVine
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7 posted 07-01-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Where did you hide this one? Very good!  
Jamie
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8 posted 07-01-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Getting over a block by writing about it.
Superb Maree.
jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Severn
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9 posted 07-03-2000 02:12 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Lubberly lubberly stuff....



K
Brad
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10 posted 07-03-2000 03:29 AM       View Profile for Brad   Email Brad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad

I liked this one. Has my vote,
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


11 posted 07-03-2000 04:12 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Been there, done that, got the t-shirt. You've nailed this one m'dear. To a "t." As much as I hate to use the word... perfect.
tracie66
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12 posted 07-03-2000 04:46 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Great stuff   well done, I enjoyed this very much
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Poertree
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13 posted 07-03-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for Poertree   Email Poertree   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poertree

perhaps my favourite so far .. the style Maree ... the style ..~sigh~

P
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14 posted 07-03-2000 05:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well done, Maree!  

Denise
Christopher
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15 posted 07-04-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

I'm bumping this one back up because it stuck with me so much!
Balladeer
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16 posted 07-04-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Glad you did, Chris. I missed this one. Voting here....very nice work, Angel
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17 posted 07-05-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
What a joy to read your work.
~*Marge*~


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Poertree
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18 posted 07-07-2000 09:22 AM       View Profile for Poertree   Email Poertree   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poertree

I'm bumping this one back up because it stuck with me so much!  

i'm serious MM .. it did!

Dark Angel
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19 posted 07-07-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank you all, for you sweet, kind, and lovely replies and for taking the time for reading...Christopher and Poertree thanks for bumping it back up again   Thank you.

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"
Geoffrey Sonnen
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20 posted 07-08-2000 06:02 AM       View Profile for Geoffrey Sonnen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Geoffrey Sonnen

Hello Dark Angel (what a cool name),Doreen invited me to this incredible site and am just getting acquainted with everything.I remember reading your offerings at O.S.You have such a unique style and it seems I have to go back and reread what you contribute many times.You have a way of stirring thought and summoning analysis.That's what makes a good writer.Thanks for the read !  
Dark Angel
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21 posted 07-09-2000 05:38 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Geoffrey, thank you so much for you lovely reply and compliment   err My offerings at O.S ? I'm not quite sure what you mean here.
Thank You and again Welcome to Passions  


Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"
Geoffrey Sonnen
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22 posted 07-09-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for Geoffrey Sonnen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Geoffrey Sonnen

Maybe I'm mistaken. I'm sorry if I am. I thought that I had seen your moniker at "Open Scroll". Could there be two Dark Angels ? I certainly think not. There seems to be only one, judging by the quality and uniqueness that you exhibit in your incredible writing. Sorry if I goofed !
          Peace to you,  Geoff
Dark Angel
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23 posted 07-10-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Geoffrey, Yes you have mistaken me with someone else and yes I think there may be a few Dark Angels about   I have not even heard of Open Scroll  
no problem about the goof up   It happens!
Well nice to hear from you again. Peace back  



Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"
Martie
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24 posted 07-10-2000 12:34 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Okay so I'm a little slow...but I'm voting...great poem!
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