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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In The Moonlight Shadows Dancing ~*Marge Tindal*~ Softly through the window rays of moonbeams touch my face Shadowed by the memories of another time another place ~o~ In the moonlight shadows dancing reminding me of love once glancing back at me through another's eyes lit with promise and surprise ~o~ Love that made my heart freely dance now merely shadows of a taken chance In the moonlight shadows play dancing shadows of another day ~o~ In the moonlight shadows dancing In the moonlight shadows romancing Sound of music from above filled with promises of love ~o~ Dancing shadows on moonlight bearing Lovely memories we are sharing In the moonbeams romantic glancing In the moonlight shadows dancing ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
breath takingly beautiful. "An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots" joy division |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful piece, Marge! I love how you repeat "in the moonlight shadows dancing" throughout the poem, a great effect.  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
One of my favorites!  |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What precious images this brings to my mind. Simply beautiful Marge. Bonnie |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Marge, Yet another great read. Sweet and soft, and just a little bit lonely (sort of). Mike |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, the title alone is worth the price of admission...the quality of the poem itself is icing on the cake |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge...so lovely this...will you dance with me? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BrianM~ Thank you, love. Melissa~ I sincerely appreciate your comments. PoetdeVine~ Mine too - Thank you. BSC~ Thank you so much,hon. Mike~ Yes, just a touch ... but 'soft and sweet'. Balladeer~ This beautiful piece came about as a challenge from our own Hoot gal. I thought that it spawned some of the loveliest poetry of any challenge to date from many of our poets. I'm thankful for the inspiration. Thanks for the 'icing' ... Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ An invitation I couldn't refuse ... thank you, my sister friend. Love you ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh I remember this...I recognized the title and had to read again!! This is and has been a wonderful piece!! Very nice, I'm glad you submitted this!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful Marge. . . Glad that you submitted it!!! ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, this is beautiful! I love everything about it! It belongs in our book, and in my personal library. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
Yet again, Marge, an excellent piece..i always look forward to reading your beautiful work. |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
Yet again, Marge, an excellent piece..i always look forward to reading your beautiful work. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so beautiful and melodic Marge! A wonderful addition to the book (click) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu~ Thank you - I'm glad you like this choice. Sven~ Thank you, my friend. LoveBug~ Thank you on both counts, my dear. ChristopherJ~ I appreciate your comments. (shucks, I even appreciate them twice. )Kit~ Yeah ... I like the melody too. Thank you. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Definatley a must for the book, melodious and sweet-sounding. Beautiful Marge.Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This one sounds like music Very beautiful Liz |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I remember this challenge, it was the first one I participated in, so much fun, this is beautiful, definately needs a *vote* -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Marge, this really is beautiful. I agree with Balladeer, the title could stand alone as poetry. But then you followed up with a poem worthy of that intro. I loved it. Pete |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Well you have me and my shadow dancing. Beautiful. |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Aaahhh, so shadows aren't always scary things on the landing in the middle of the night then Nicely done Marge.Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yeppers..its a keeper but then arent they all...  loved this one repetative verses jm |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I recall this one...in fact, you started quite an inspirational flurry when it first hit these blue pages... perhaps Ron will want all of those who participated to make a specific section in the book!? Oh wait, then we would have to get the pairings of those who pen off of each other so well... ah well, perhaps Volumes II, III, etc. etc. Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
lovely poem. really good. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge what a beautiful dreamy poem, I too remember this one and it's a fav of mine as well Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Well, I can't say I've seen this one before... What a treat to see it for the first time!!! A lovely poem, Marge!!... Almost as lovely as you Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
In the break of day smiling.....lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. got my vote! Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ Thank you my poet friend. Elizabeth, my friend~ It was a musical phrase for the challenge - Thank you. SEA~ I think it was my first rise to challenge also. I remember yours too. Thank you. NotAPoet~ Awwww ! Thank you. Seymour, my friend~ So good to see you dancing ! Eric~ Oh ... no they are not - they live to dance ! JanetMarie~ Thank you, dear lady. Sunshine~ Love your idea. Lil' Lizzie~ Sweet, sweet friend - I'm always glad to share with you. Promethus~ I appreciate knowing that I gave you a smile. Thank you for giving me one back. Tracie~ The inspiration took wing and flew to the page. Glad you enjoyed it. EPoet~ Glad you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! I remember this challenge from Ruth as if it were yesterday! I think it was the biggest response to a challenge ever at Passions, wasn't it? Yours was among the best too! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ You're right ... it produced some absolutely beautiful and varied responses. And speaking of our ~Hoot~ where is she ???? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
This got to be one of favorites poem you have done. I can not say how much I actually like this one. Thank you Marge for posting it, my morning just became a lot brighter. Love Hemut The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HelmutB~ My friend ... just knowing I'm in your morning is enough to make me smile. Thank you, love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this read to me like a song I had somehow heard before...in my own heart. Beautiful Marge! ~Heather |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I a-member this challenge! And you're right (I didn't say that out loud) that it spawned some immensely beautiful poetry! This m'dear is a perfect example! |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Beautiful...though it has a sad tone. sighs ~Kay |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Ok not that you really need one more vote, but I do like this piece here. So I will hit that vote box anyway. I agree with the sad tone of it...but it's peaceful at the sametime in a way. -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
XAngel~ What a lovely thing to say. Thank you. Christopher~ Awwww ! My heart *hugs* you. AniKay~ Welcome to Passions ! Thank you for the *sigh*. Holly~ Sweetie, it's not about votes, though I thank you for yours ... it's about sharing beautiful poetic thoughts with other talented poets. Thank you so much for your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Well, Marge... you obviously won't need my vote... hehe... but you've got it anyway! wonderful romantic verse |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ Hey you ! You know I appreciate it because you let me know you enjoyed it ... not cause ya' voted ! (pay ya' later !) LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Kabam margie good job |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Grinning here...since I posed the challange for this one, I couldn't resist paying my respects for this awesome piece of poetry |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Gotta love Marge's Moons...  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
You sure set a high standard for the rest of us. I would need a rocket tied to my behind to reach the peak of quality in writing that you exhibit while singing in the shower. Simply said, you SHINE. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot~ Yes, you did ! It was my pleasure to be so inspired. I thank you. Nan~ Thank you. I just love the inspiration I get from this place. DannyH~ Awwwwww ! Thank you, my friend. Laughing here at 'a rocket' ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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