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Cerenity
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0 posted 2000-06-25 11:26 AM



On Angels Wings


I pray the Lord my soul to take
to a higher level of comprehension.
Please give me the insight to
wisdom’s gate.

Show me the realm which truth
resides, the peace of mind and
serenity to understand
your will.

I have not the mindset to endure
these troublesome trials before me, I
ask of you the strength and
endurance to remain  
afoot oh lord.

In my oh so human state I find
fault, and I am wavering in my
trust, please hold my spirit with
gentle hand and guide me
through this time of great
heartache and pain.  

I beg of thee my Lord show my
concerns your tender mercies and
give of your spirit directions in
their behalf in this
time of need.


Abundant your love you have
always shown, but now I on bent
knee plea for your kindness to
be of great urgent need.

Find oh Lord this prayer of mine,
this begging if you will, and bless it
with your spirit, and send it upon
angels wings.

Show me oh so plainly your
love please Lord, send it with
angels to me.


By,  Cerenity



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1 posted 2000-06-25 12:03 PM


Cerenity~
This is compassionately moving.

'In my oh so human state I find
fault, and I am wavering in my
trust, please hold my spirit with
gentle hand and guide me
through this time of great
heartache and pain'

Beautiful, dearie.
~*Marge*~


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Denise
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2 posted 2000-06-25 12:04 PM


This is a beautifully moving prayer, Cerenity! Very lovely!

Denise

brian madden
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3 posted 2000-06-25 12:57 PM


a beautiful prayer/poem


Abundant your love you have
always shown, but now I on bent
knee plea for your kindness to
be of great urgent need.

Cerenity
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4 posted 2000-06-25 02:07 PM


Hi everyone,

Thank you so much for your kind replys, I wrote and dedicated this to a very special lady Liz Santos she is one of the sweetes people, thank you again.

Love,  Cerenity


Mike
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5 posted 2000-06-25 02:08 PM


Beautifully written.  
Dark Angel
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6 posted 2000-06-25 05:19 PM


Beautiful, Beautiful!!! Cerenity.  

My grief lies onward and my joy behind
(Shakespeare)

Christopher J
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7 posted 2000-06-25 07:59 PM


I loved, loved this poem Cerenity, i hope the Lord hears you...
Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 2000-06-25 08:30 PM


Cerenity,
I don't know if you recieved my 2 e-mails which didn't seem to go through, perhaps because I'm using my son's computer
I;m so happy that you posted this most beautiful poem and feel so honored that you dedicated it to me
This one will surely be prited
liz

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9 posted 2000-06-25 09:14 PM


Your sincerity shines in this one, serenity. Count me in.........
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10 posted 2000-06-25 09:47 PM


You've articulated what we all feel with grace and heart. I loved this prayer.

Mike

Janet Marie
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11 posted 2000-06-26 06:03 PM


exceptional Cerenity...
perfect
jm

Cerenity
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12 posted 2000-06-26 08:45 PM


Hi everyone,

Thank you so much for your kind words, I am sorry I have not replyed to each one of you but life has been very HARD lately and time seems to not be there so I am really sorry once again,

Love  Cerenity

P.S. Liz, no I did not get your e-mails but don't worry about it just try to relax and have some fun, love ya,  Cerenity

AVANTI
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13 posted 2000-06-29 09:02 AM


lovely...simply charming work...
I was moved...
awesome work

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Cerenity
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14 posted 2000-06-29 11:52 AM


Hi AVANTI,

Thank you so much for your kind reply and I have not seen your name yet so you are very WELCOME at passions, and I look forward to reading your poetry, until then thanks again.

Cerenity

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15 posted 2000-07-15 12:21 PM


Incredible.   This should definitely be included.
Cerenity
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16 posted 2000-07-15 12:25 PM


Hi Serenity,

Thank you so much that means alot to me, I love this poem,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

BSC
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17 posted 2000-07-15 01:08 PM


Beautiful, moving piece Cerenity, such a lovely prayer.  Bonnie
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