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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa 
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Her eyes pierce into my soul, seeking out my inner self. She makes me feel complete, whole, together. She helps me to my feet and brings me to my knees with her love. Her eyes penetrate the deepest depths of my soul. Chasing away the shadows in my heart. Her love is the torch that brightens my world. She is my life and my world. Her eyes sooth my troubled mind and body, making me wish I was one with her. Her eyes I could stare into them forever. Lost in the depths of her soul-searching gaze, I feel my heart touched by her love and kindness. Her eyes invite me to come discover the world in her eyes. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
epoet this is a beautiful verse . i hope it does not go unnoticed good work i can see her eyes If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
I like poems like this one...it was good, you have my vote! Keep up the good work. |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thanks for the comments. hope this gets in the book myself. I thank you both once again. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
She helps me to my feet and brings me to my knees with her love. we women have a tendency to do that don't we? I liked this poem alot, keep writing.  ~Heather |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thank you very much. I think my wife would agree. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Rose Petal Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 52WVa. USA |
epoet,you have my vote, my eyes are what people notice first,great poem for the book, romantic. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
 voteAll my love, Jeffrey |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I can only agree. Excellent, just does she knows how you look into her eyes. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thank you one and all. I appreciate the sentiments. I only hope this does make the book so she can see what I see in "her eyes". P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful and sweet! |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thank you A Romantic Heart. I also am particular to this one as this was written for my wife. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
had to come back and post this little note, this poem shows my love and devotion to my wife. She has only seen this poem once and it had the desired effect that I was looking for. She loved it so much she wanted me to post this on here so everyone could see just how much I love her P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Very expressive eyes indeed! so glad you brought it up, I had almost missed reading this beautiful piece, regards to you epoet and your wife, sudhir |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thank you sudhir, it is a lovely tribute to a lovely woman isn't it? P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
This is marvelous, ePoet... I feel the same here, the eyes of a woman you know can penetrate every parts of your body... it's just great.. tick tick tick.. into the book you shall sail.. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EPoet~ A lovely tribute to an inviting look into the heart ... by stepping in through the eyes. I think we all realize that the eyes are the doorway to the heart and soul ... 'Her eyes invite me to come discover the world in her eyes.' Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
very nice poem always have believed in the power of the eyes myself |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Their eyes can indeed be enchanting. You have captured that enchantment perfectly here. I enjoyed it very much. Thanks, Pete |
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thank you one and all. I am honored that you all find this tribute so well written. I hope that the rest of my poetry can meet your expectations of me that developed from reading this. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
just a little note to add, myk wife was on the other day and looked at all of your comments and said that you people are truly friends. She said that only freinds would understand the feeling and the passion behind this poem to her. She also said she was shocked by how many of you really liked this poem. Thank you for making her see that poetry is never a trivial thing to me. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
This was a very beautiful poem for your wife. Thank you for sharing it with us here. Hugs, Heather Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories. |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thank you very much. I just hope this one makes the book as it is my only submission that I thought to be good enough for publication. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
they are the window to the soul arent they good write--i know your one-and-only must love this  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Posted twice.. see belooooooow.. ^_^ [This message has been edited by Yu Lan (edited 08-05-2000).] |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Eyes! ^_^ Yeah, the eyes do it all, eh? ^_^ Well written, epoet.. ^_^ and yes, we're all friends here!! ^_^ emotions well expressed, that man.. Luv, Lynne |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
thanks dv. yu lan you are so right the eyes to me are exactly the way that I described them. gateways to my wifes soul. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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