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Munda
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0 posted 2000-06-24 05:32 PM



The Beauty of Nature

Glittering crystal dewdrops
Upon a golden leave
Slowly drip upon wet soil
Spider's web underneath

A caterpillar changing
Into a butterfly
The perfect little wonder
Takes off into the sky

Weeping willow near the mere
Graceful melancholy
Swans seek shelter in its shade
View of serenity

Softly touched by gentle breeze
An Eagle on its flight
Precious glorious moment
Before it gathers height

Mountain peaks covered with snow
Guardians of the world
Majestic ancient solitude
Watch Mother Earth unfurl

Our nature of such beauty
Enchanting elegance
A sigh, almost a whisper
Hypnotic life romance


Munda

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-06-24 05:54 PM


Munda~
This is beautifully rendered.

'Enchanting elegance' not only in
nature - but in your words.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-06-24 06:01 PM


I love the imagery in this Munda..very lovely!  
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3 posted 2000-06-24 06:36 PM


Munda -This is wonderful, beautiful pictures created with your pen.  Bonnie
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4 posted 2000-06-24 06:38 PM


Munda,
Yum! The part about the willow in the mere ... wow. Heck, the whole thing was great. More! More!

Mike

Mike
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5 posted 2000-06-24 06:40 PM


Beautifully written Munda.  Me likes.
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2000-06-24 09:36 PM


what a jewel of a poem
just beautiful munda
loved this one
LOVELY
jm

Denise
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7 posted 2000-06-24 09:39 PM


Wow! This is absolutely beautiful, Munda! I think I have to say this is my favorite of yours!  

Denise

AVANTI
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8 posted 2000-06-25 12:23 PM


simple in harmony with nature...
i love the flow...
if i have to talk like mike,then me loves.

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


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9 posted 2000-06-25 12:24 PM


simple in harmony with nature...
i love the flow...
if i have to talk like mike,then me loves.

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


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10 posted 2000-06-25 02:11 AM


Ahh, beautiful poem Munda!  I enjoyed this one muchly  

Abrahm Simons

"Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon

Christopher J
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11 posted 2000-06-25 02:16 AM


Such a romantic poem!  it made me feel different inside...i wish i knew how to write poems that did that..this has my vote!
brian madden
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12 posted 2000-06-25 07:07 AM


Munda,

Weeping willow near the mere
Graceful melancholy
Swans seek shelter in its shade
View of serenity

a beautiful poem. really enjoyed it.

"An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools
Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots"
joy division

Dennis L. White
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13 posted 2000-06-26 07:02 AM


Munda,
  This is really beautiful, the aesthetics about us found in nature if we but open our eyes! WELL DONE!  Dennis :^)

Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2000-06-26 11:48 AM


Enchanting poem indeed!!!

Munda,
My regards to you,
Sudhir.

Death, be not proud, though some have called thee,
Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so;

- John Donne

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15 posted 2000-06-26 01:28 PM


Well done, Munda. Beautiful imagery and so uplifting.

Pete

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16 posted 2000-06-26 04:15 PM


What a beautiful, peaceful picture  

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

Munda
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17 posted 2000-06-26 07:28 PM


I'm overwhelmed by the number of responses. Thank you all very kindly.  
Nicole
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18 posted 2000-06-27 02:39 AM


I felt like I was there, and have to let out a sigh.  Such a beautiful poem!
X Angel
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19 posted 2000-06-29 02:00 PM


ooooh this was VUNDERBAR!

~H

Corazon
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20 posted 2000-06-29 03:21 PM


*big smiles while voting* loved the read, beautiful poem
Elizabeth Santos
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21 posted 2000-06-29 03:47 PM


Beautifully written. I love poems about nature
Liz

Christopher
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22 posted 2000-08-03 10:50 AM


M'friend, I love this poem, but you know you definitely have me hooked when you use the word "crystal."  

Wonder what Freud would think of that... woudl someone ask him???  

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