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When do you know it's gone all wrong??

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Holly
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0 posted 06-23-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

"LOST"


Lost in a haze of complete confusion
I feel this battle of my heart & mind I'm losing
Never understanding how I ended up here
Not wanting to hurt you & filled with such fear

I continue to stay forever lost in my twisted reality
My heart, mind, & soul feel like a tragic fatality
I choose not to see things that are painfully obvious to others
Now my heart feels so heavy with lies we both try to cover

I feel so alone & so very lost in my world
I scream for help~yet I'm never heard
Losing faith, losing hope, losing heart, losing soul
In general just being forever lost
Looking around my world I start to realize my loss
And seeing what it has cost

How did I get here? How did this happen to me?
All I wanted was to be loved for free
A no regret kind of love
One that fits me like a glove

How did something so right turn into
something that carries so much pain & sadness into our lives?
Here I sit..lost forever in my own haze of complete confusion...

HLB '99
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Justbleu
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1 posted 06-23-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

So sad...nice poem!!  Some of the best poetry is when it relates to soo many lives!!
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown
CMGrimm
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2 posted 06-24-2000 08:58 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Very sad...very touching...very well written..nice job here ...

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


X Angel
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3 posted 06-24-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

yeah...I know whatcha mean...
*sigh*
good job!
~Heather
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State of constant confusion!


4 posted 06-29-2000 01:59 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Very sad, heartfelt piece

All my love,
Jeffrey

Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
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5 posted 07-30-2000 01:52 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Much emotion in this poem 'sigh' wonderful work here.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)
CMGrimm
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6 posted 08-07-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

aww...c'mon you people have better give this one another chance.....

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


Jamie
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since 06-26-2000
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Blue Heaven


7 posted 08-07-2000 10:57 PM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

How did this one go unseen by me??
It is a very heartfelt and all to close story.



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


Holly
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8 posted 08-08-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Chris-Hey my little cheering section..hehe. I thank you SOOOOO very much for your sweet, sweet words. I enjoy having my own cheering section! I'm certainly fond of being yours. ;o)

Prometheus-Thank you! I appreciate your words of kindness and taking the time to read. You guys are great!
love & all,
-Holly


I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

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