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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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-My Beautiful Storm- like a beautiful storm you blew into my heart of stone thoughts of you running through my mind, taking away the feelings of being alone you've opened my eyes to so much, you've given me back that passionate rush how I've missed that feeling in my world, how I want so much to be just yours falling into your life and into your soul feeling my heart start to mend and grow then feeling the wall you start to place between you and I it makes me sit back and just wonder why how do I turn off these feelings that have consumed so much of my heart and mind sometimes I wish I could just turn back the hands of time facing the truth of never having you in my arms again, I start clinging to you as my friend but knowing this storm has to come to an end, I realize my worst fear...the loss of my lover and my friend oh how I will always love my beautiful storm that blew into my heart....even as it rips me completely apart HLB I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
yes..yes...i like it, i am going through the same thing...it is so sad, but a brillant poem...i am going to look more of yours up! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
another strong emotional poem... I like the style in which you write... I look forward to seeing more take care, jm |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Chris-Thank you so much for the sweet words. I'm so sorry you know these feelings all too well though. I hope things get better for you.  JM-I consider this high praise from reading your work. Thank you so much for the vote of condifenece. I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sigh* yup....this is an all true tale.. ~Heather |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
What Heather said Beautiful poem Holly. Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Damn! I hate it when that happens. a stormy, vivacious poem... thanks for the read! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Holly, Well this is wonderful my friend, yes relationships can for sure produce some mighty big storms in our lives, thank you so much for sharing this, so much enjoyed. Cerenity |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
oh man....ouch.... I luvit though.... great piece here hun... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
How well you've written about such a harsh storm....This is great. Bonnie |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
I to know how this feels  (Good writting.......... LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Unique way of writing what so many can relate to. I love how you ended it! *After every storm, the sun must shine* |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Cerenity-you are so correct..storms throughout our lives, but I guess that's what makes life interesting. Bonnie, Heather, & WhtDove-Thank you all for the sweet words. I was shocked to see my poem that was posted a while back on todays topics. How sweet of you to go back and look through the post and find it.  Chris--as always my sweet friend I appreciate your words! I value your views and opinions...so thank you for always being so sweetly supportive.  THANKS AGAIN GUYS! love & all, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very well written Holly hope the set back dosen't harden that heart again best wishes |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is so sad but well written, hope that storm hasn't made too much of a mess of your heart *HUG* Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Holly, I really like this one. You've done a very nice job here. fh |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Again friends, I thank you for the words! The storm hasn't made too much of a mess Traci...without a storm we never see a rainbow. YOU GUYS ARE GREAT! love & all, -Holly |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great writing ..very heartfelt .. I'm glad you sailed into passions to hang your collection of emotional tapesteries on our wall.....GMV...ethome.. |
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