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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-06-23 01:49 PM


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P-People who are givers of their hearts,
A-Accepting poetry of different sorts,
S-Souls meeting to conspire,
S-Searching for love along the wire,
I-Inside the forums you will find,
O-Open hearts and open minds.
N-Needing a friend or Two,
S-Sign right in,We are here for you!

I-Intelligent minds who think alike,
N-Never complaining or giving hype.

P-Poets we are, even though some are new.
O-Often we write a poem or two.
E-Everyone is welcome to come and share,
T-The gift of your love spread everywhere!
R-Remember the lines as they have touched your heart.
Y-You will never forget them after you depart.



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-23-2000).]

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-06-23 01:57 PM


ARH, job well done!  This is very nice, and speaks well of everyone here...
Sunshine

LOL at you...I posted this response in the one you wanted to have deleted!  Finally caught you!


Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2000-06-23 02:12 PM


Thanks Sunshine! LOL! I accidently hit the button by mistake, I am on my laptop, and moving about, hit a hole and it make my fingers push the button twice! haha!
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-06-23 09:43 PM


very cool and creative
great acrostic and a perfect poem
to represent us all in the book
jm

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-06-23 09:45 PM


Fabulous Acrostic! Just perfect for the book!  

Denise

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2000-06-25 11:33 PM


Thanks guys! It was written a long time ago when I first joined Passions, I wrote it from my heart!
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
6 posted 2000-06-26 09:35 AM


I agree with Denise! It says it all about this place!
Mike
Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

7 posted 2000-06-26 12:41 PM


Nicely written.  Enjoyed.
Colin
Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England
8 posted 2000-06-26 04:34 PM


Oooh, I've got a warm glow from knowing I'm part of this happy family  

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
9 posted 2000-06-27 03:21 AM


big smiles...i really wish the book was gonna be called Passions in Poetry but sigh yuh
JP
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
10 posted 2000-06-27 03:30 AM


Ingenious!


Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

"Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
11 posted 2000-06-27 04:26 AM


^_^ I haven't seen many acrostic poems here.. this is pretty neat! Well done. ^_^



Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu



tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
12 posted 2000-06-27 04:53 AM


Excellent acrostic and a rhyming one at that. I love acrostics but find them very hard to rhyme...you've done well  

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
13 posted 2000-06-28 02:20 AM


This is just perfect!!!!   You have my vote for sure!!! I think it belongs on the first page, as sort of an introduction,,,,,Great idea you had here!!!!   < !signature-->

Julie  




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Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

14 posted 2000-06-28 03:28 AM


You have written an excellent Acrostic poem here A R H   Well Done  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"


Rose Petal
Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 52
WVa. USA
15 posted 2000-06-29 12:36 PM


you do acrostics too, my you are so talented and versitle, I see my name under Dark Angels poem...(very nice Angel)

OH anyway I agree with the above,
This should be at the begining of the book!

Rose Petal
Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 52
WVa. USA
16 posted 2000-06-29 12:18 PM


  



[This message has been edited by Rose Petal (edited 06-30-2000).]

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
17 posted 2000-06-30 02:29 AM


Thanks for your comments!
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
18 posted 2003-04-10 11:19 PM


It's really a shame that I missed this....
Bridgette

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