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Xeonox
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0 posted 06-23-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for Xeonox   Email Xeonox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Xeonox

You come like a dream
and leave like a nightmare
you give me your love
only to take it away
you show me that you care
only to deny me of yourself
we shared the passion once before
why not share it once again?
Love me like you use to
Don't be a stranger like you once were,
Show me the feelings that u felt in the past,
Let there be a future between us,
Let there be you and I,
Remember the first time we met,
Two total strangers looking for love,
let us not go back to that time,
I cannot take the pain any longer,
Why must you deny me of your love?
Do you see how you bleed when you cut yourself?
That is the way my heart bleeds when you stop loving me,
Why must you end what we have between us?
No reason, no explanation, no notice that u have left me,
I don't want to lose your love,
or your special touch,
I can't live without the smell of your hair in my face,
and without your lips on my lips,
without your hand in my hand,
without your love in my heart,
and without your soul with my soul,
let there be love where it once was,
coping with emptiness all this time
from which I can't seem to unwind,
Why can't you be kind?
as you break this bind,
The bind that was made,
by none other than ourselves.



Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).
© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Justbleu
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since 08-31-99
Posts 3430
Oregon, Originally From Alaska


1 posted 06-24-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

A lot of deep and honest feeling shown here!!  Very nice!!
Bridgette  


"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown
Christopher J
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since 06-21-2000
Posts 96


2 posted 06-25-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for Christopher J   Email Christopher J   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher J

what a wonderful poem...i can relate to this, hope you have more poems i can read!
CMGrimm
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since 02-14-2000
Posts 700
USA


3 posted 06-25-2000 10:15 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Very very nice...

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


Cerenity
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since 02-16-2000
Posts 2712
Escondido-California


4 posted 06-29-2000 04:35 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Xeonox,

Very enjoyable read, thank you.

Cerenity
Holly
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5 posted 06-29-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

WOW! You show real emotions and give complete honesty here..I'm impressed. This is a great poem.  

love & all,
-Holly


I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

Di
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since 06-29-2000
Posts 23
Ontario, Canada


6 posted 06-29-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Di   Email Di   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Di

I can totally relate to this poem. It shows
a lot of REAL emotion. Well done!
Di
Broken_Winged_Angel
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since 04-06-2000
Posts 999
Small Town, Somewhere


7 posted 10-05-2000 06:41 AM       View Profile for Broken_Winged_Angel   Email Broken_Winged_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Broken_Winged_Angel's Home Page   View IP for Broken_Winged_Angel

Wow.  Very open and honest.  I'll be searching for more of your work.  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.
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