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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Hold Me Like Tomorrow Matters ~*Marge Tindal*~ When shadows of the night awaken you come waltzing through the door Hold me like tomorrow matters dance with me forevermore Through the years I will remember love that always held me tight Hold me like tomorrow matters do not leave me in the night Forever holding and enfolding thoughts of you within my heart Hold me like tomorrow matters from this love I will not depart Always I will remember evenings locked in your embrace Hold me like tomorrow matters your love reflected on my face |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ You simply amaze me with your talent. Lovely poem....touching images you paint with your pen.  Wonderful... LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ Superb title and a touchingly beautiful piece...so much love and tenderness displayed I think that his love is not only reflected on your face but in your heart as well as this poem shows. Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I love being hugged like tomorrow matters This is fantastic Marge |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Lovely sentiment. You pulled of the repitition very well. Hard to do without being monotonous. Congrats. Pete |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Gosh - you make me feel so good about my writing. Thank you. Tracie~ Such lovely things you write in your replies. I so appreciate you. Rex~ Yeah, me too ! Thanks, hon. NotAPoet~ Thank you, Pete. Some things just bear repeating, huh ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
A truly wonderful poem. Enjoyed very much. |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
This is very lovely...touching...sweet...and I find it very heartfelt. I like it alot! Keep up the wonderful visions you have that lie within yourw work.  -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, this is beautiful! I didn't see this the first time, and I'm glad I got to see it now. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--a wonderful poem, my lovely friend, and it sure gets a vote from me. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
wow. ^_^ nuff said.. I voted 4 this.. Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'll never forget this one! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it. Holly~ Thanks, hon. I appreciate your thoughts and I'll sure try ! LoveBug~ I'm glad you did too ! Martie~ You know I appreciate you. YuLan~ Thank you, Lynne. Denise~ Gosh, what a sweet comment. Thanks, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
forever holding and enfolding LOVE that line ... oh it matters jm |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Okay, I will! Except, squirrels have trouble holding deer -- not to mention they get stepped on entirely too much (once is enough ).M. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Marge My grief lies onward and my joy behind (Shakespeare) |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
beuatiful words... it's a wonderful feeling to be held and watched over forever and ever... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ It DOES matter, doesn't it hon ? Thank you, poet. Mike~ Then the 'deer' shall hold the 'squirrel'.. and once is NEVER enough ! DarkAngel~ Thank you sweet poet. Avanti~ A man who loves music, as you do, would sing many songs of love. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Love the title Love the poem Love the heart that wrote it Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ And you know this little heart is full of love for you too. Thank you for finding the time to reply and to post your lovely rhymes. My love and hugs to Tony. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Hold me like tomorrow matters do not leave me in the night" Marge, it's beautiful. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"Beautiful" does not come close to describing this poem, Marge!!! Your heart has beamed upon a page and filled it with light. Your soul has spilled exquisite rhyme upon that page and brought it to life. Love you, my friend. Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ I know this one touches you tenderly. *Hugs* Lil' Lizzie~ What a totally beautiful comment, my dear. You make this poet feel special. I hug you with my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Yes please do! I loved this Marge ~Heather |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
XAngel~ Thanks, hon. I enjoy your enthusiasm. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Very lovely poem... but oh to be held like tomorrow doesn't matter, is sooo devine! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Grrr.. Marge, if you don't quit tugging my heartstrings every time you write a poem, it's going to come untied and fall right out of my chest!  Beautiful lady, only thee. Chris |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MagnoliaBlue~ Thank you. Oh, it does matter - doesn't it? Christopher~ Sweetheart ... if it does I promise to catch it and hold it tenderly ! Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Tomorrow would always matter with you, Marge.....and today...and yesterday...and next year....and groundhog day...and |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ You are such a sweetheart ... Have I said that before ? ? ? ? Oh ... well I knew I'd heard it somewhere ! Hmmmm ! I must of meant it. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dad-o-8 New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 8 |
Beautiful sentiments expressed like only you can do.....another keeper.......voting yes!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i love that line.."hold me like tomorrow matters.." isnt that what we all long for... this is so sweet.. dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
well done marge perfecto as always |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I could have sworn I voted for this already.....oh well votes in |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dad-o-8~ I love you ! DGVarner~ It is what we long for - and so fortunate when we find it. Thank you. Walt~ Thanks, my friend. Jeffrey~ Well .... I'm pleased you thought to come in. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow how did I miss this one Marge..it's beautiful I am voting |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, just visiting from DP, and saw this lovely poem. Very romantic and beautiful, and such a nice feeling evoked from it. Thanks for writing. catalinamoon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thank you so much for finding it. I appreciate you. CatalinaMoon~ I do appreciate your visit. Glad you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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