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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
A sunset with radiant beams, Settled over the mountainside; An image seen only in dreams. The moon snuck into the picture, Causing shadows to dance on the ground, One by one the stars appeared, Stepping in without making a sound. Cattails now swaying gently, Keeping time to music unheard. Moved by the delicate breezes, As soft as the most loving word. In the distance the song of crickets, Bringing melodies to the night, Bullfrogs adding their rhythm, Prompted fireflies to show their delight, Ducks, their heads now hidden, Slept through this magnificent show, Slumbering soundly behind the reeds, Beneath the moon’s velvet glow. This bog in the evening’s silhouette, A delicate serenade, With nature performing nightly, In this most enchanting glade. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 06-22-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is enchanting wonderful imagery and detail just perfect jm |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
Beautiful, wonderful, spectacular, what more is needed to be said.. i loved it! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSC~ Such beautiful thoughts of nature ... sounds like my place ... I love it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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monte Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 33 |
Very nice. You have my vote.... |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Oh this was lovely! And *bump* back to the top so people can read this!  ~Heather |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Janet, Christopher, Marge & Monte, Thanks so much for the kind replies, so glad you enjoyed it. Heather, you're so sweet, thanks. Bonnie |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
enchanting is right and its got my vote |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Look what I've found! Love it! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A 'most enchanting' tale! I like it.  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dearest Bonnie; This is your best ever, I love the enchanting feel and flow as you unfold each wonder of this poetic lanscape and I feel lost in the perfecting of your wondrous gift for creating so much beauty. Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ell |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
What a lovely picture you paint, Bonnie! Just beautiful! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Enchanting and lovely! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Lovely images presented here, Bonnie, and very enchanting indeed.... regards, sudhir |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Thanks to you all for reading and for all of your kind replies. Bonnie |
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