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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


25 posted 06-30-2000 03:12 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

(tears flowing) This was beautiful!!!!
Martie
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26 posted 06-30-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is supurb writing...you got a vote from me!
Colin
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27 posted 07-01-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

I think, Chris, that the best thing you can change is nothing  

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.
Cerenity
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28 posted 07-13-2000 04:34 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Chris,

Well this is a beauty, very, very much enjoyed.

Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)
Sudhir Iyer
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29 posted 07-14-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

Chris,
change something... nothing ...

Hey this one is exquisite... very well done...

By the way, are you glowing now? Well, keep glowing for it is raining bad over here... hope your glow reaches here from through the clouds...  

regards,
sudhir
Kit McCallum
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30 posted 07-14-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

WOW!  I'm absolutely stunned at the exquisite imagery in this verse Christopher!  Perfection dear poet!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
MagnoliaBlue
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31 posted 07-14-2000 08:45 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

*tears and smiles*
I am just going to take the liberty of pretending that this was written for The Skipper and The Lady.
I do love it very much.
You write beautifully,Chris!  

MagnoliaBlue


~My Skipper Jim
I love you!
Your Lady June~

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32 posted 07-14-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Oh Chris, this is magnificant. I could no better "belt" this than I could.... offend Volkswagen!!!!  

I REALLY hope this makes it in the book.. I'm sure it will.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


33 posted 08-03-2000 11:19 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

OK, last one (of mine) that I'll bring to the top today! Thank you all for being so supportive!

Chris
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34 posted 08-07-2000 02:59 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

whew!  that last bit really got me..shivers!  great poem!

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

insect
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35 posted 08-07-2000 10:26 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

I'm gonna belt ya!
Belt ya with a vote
ethome
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36 posted 08-08-2000 05:08 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Can't belt you at all I'm still blinded by the florescence of it all.......excellent..
click..
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