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HelmutB
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0 posted 2000-06-21 07:50 PM


The beauty you portray

Silent space filled with resonance
I reach for your hand "Would you like to dance?"
I've been watching you from across the empty room
Try to see you through the gloom
People dancing, I don't perceive
You stole my heart, you gentle thief
The beauty you portray
Leaves me with speechless words to say

You wear your soul there in your smile
Perhaps I induce you to sway with me for a while
Sphere like echoes the sound of waltz and swing
I raise my voice like a tenor I will sing
The beauty you portray
Leaves me with speechless words to say

Your hand so small so tender
Your eyes look into my soul, I do surrender
Your aura surrounds my mind
A fly within your web unwind
Such beauty you portray
Leaves me with speechless words to say

You contact my skin without a touch
The dimmed lights emphasize your smile so much
You wear your heart within your smile
All I can do is glare at you and sigh
Such beauty you portray
Leaves me with speechless words to say

Can't move my eyes to look away
Can't open my lips to say
The sound ebbs away, silence fills this empty chamber
We dance on, forever, I will remember
You beauty shines so bright and gay
You leave me with speechless words to say


The dance, your smile, your love, all is such divine
Take my soul away, …you are My Valentine




The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-06-21 08:40 PM


I'd like a dance too Helmut!! Nice to read you here!  
amazon_lover
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2 posted 2000-06-21 08:54 PM


Its so lovely..damn good..you're a great lover..

Sincerely
A_L

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-06-21 08:57 PM


Helmut, my friend~
Thank you for choosing this one ...
it's lovely !  
Marge is smiling ..  
Love you~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Meadowmuse
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4 posted 2000-06-21 09:57 PM


"You leave me with speechless words to say"

Beautiful...

L and SP
Claire

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2000-06-21 10:01 PM


PERFECT
excellent writing
so tender and adoring
so ... perfect...
jm

WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-06-21 10:33 PM


A romantic, tender dance. *Sigh*
Rex Allen McCoy
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7 posted 2000-06-22 12:16 PM



Helmut ... this most definately needs to be read by a lot of people

bsquirrel
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8 posted 2000-06-22 12:20 PM


Okay, I was going to say "I love the first verse!" Then I read to "the gentle thief," and that was my favorite. Then I read on and on, and I realized I couldn't cherry-pick the good stuff --- it's allll good!

Awesome poem.

Mike

HelmutB
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9 posted 2000-06-22 06:42 PM


A Thank you to you all I send
You are always there and I know I can depend
on each and every one of you
For this my friends I love you too
Your friendship means so much to me
Thank you


The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Martie
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10 posted 2000-06-22 07:09 PM


To dance with this feeling that you have would be sublime...lovely poem, Helmut.
A Romantic Heart
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11 posted 2000-06-22 10:57 PM


wooo! so romantic! loved it!
HelmutB
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12 posted 2000-06-23 08:09 PM


Martie and A Romantic Heart, thank you both for your kind words. It means so much to me, Thank you

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Denise
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13 posted 2000-06-23 09:56 PM


Such a beautiful love poem!  

Denise

HelmutB
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14 posted 2000-06-25 01:39 AM


Thank you Denise for your reply, it's heat felt

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Christopher J
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15 posted 2000-06-25 02:08 AM


"You stole my heart, you gentle thief
The beauty you portray
Leaves me with speechless words to say"

I absolutely loved this poem, especially the above lines..what a creation!..it has my vote many times over.

brian madden
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16 posted 2000-06-25 07:47 AM


Leaves me with speechless words to say...
except for wonderful. has my vote*

"An abyss that lasted creation A circus complete with all fools
Foundations that lasted the ages Then ripped apart at their roots"
joy division

linda munday
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17 posted 2000-06-25 08:47 AM


Exceptional... speechless words to say.
Beautiful poem!!!
Linda M.

Mike
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18 posted 2000-06-25 11:24 AM


Nicely written.  Enjoyed very much.
sea_of_okc
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19 posted 2000-06-25 02:22 PM


Defintely one of your best, well chosen  
Munda
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20 posted 2000-06-25 04:20 PM


Great poem, enjoyed it a lot !
Irish Rose
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21 posted 2000-06-25 04:29 PM


well, you have my vote, let's dance. this was great.
I wish I this had been on before I wrote "Lady Kathleen's Dance"
the two kind of go together!!!!

Kathleen

"How do I love thee? Let
me count the ways.
I love thee to the depth and breadth and height
My soul can reach, when feeling out of sig

HelmutB
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22 posted 2000-06-26 05:01 PM


My heart is beating fast seeing all these thoughtful replies. You all have made me feel a lot better today. Thank you. I wish I had the time to answer each one of you, but I can't. Someday I will. Thanks for being a friend.

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


devina
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23 posted 2000-06-27 02:10 AM


Well I expect a personal email ASAP MR!!! LOL I've always loved this one, dear man...hope all is well with you!!! Big hugs to you love...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


CocoBaci
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24 posted 2000-06-27 02:25 AM


Expressed by a true romantic .. such weave of poetic verse captivated me right to the end .. yearning to read more of your works on screen   Nicely done Helmut  
tracie66
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25 posted 2000-06-27 05:05 AM


Helmut~
This is superb....such beauty and grace with imagery in abundance...well done  


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



HelmutB
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26 posted 2000-06-27 07:57 PM


Devina, thank you.... I sure will add a personal mail asap lol. I'm fine but again time, stress, work is a bad combination. Just not good enough as an excuse, is it :0)

CocoBaci
A thank you to you for reading my poem, I appriciate that it captivated you.

Tracy
Also a big thank you to you, the romance will continue. I'm just not sure when  




The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Sunshine
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27 posted 2000-06-27 09:31 PM


Ah yes, I remember this one, and am glad that it is here as well...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


HelmutB
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28 posted 2000-06-29 12:41 PM


Thank you sunshine, do I miss a certain white glove poem here, from you? I don't think I have seen it. It certainly was exeptional and inspiring my friend  

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
29 posted 2000-06-30 03:48 AM


It was so beautiful that I had to read it again!
hoot_owl_rn
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30 posted 2000-06-30 08:45 AM


Ah my friend...I do remember this well. May I have this dance?
HelmutB
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31 posted 2000-07-02 08:25 PM


A romantic heart
Thank you for reading it again. I'm glad you like it so much. A dance like this is hard to let go of.

Ruth
Hello and thank you for your reply, yes I know you remember well.
Hugs and Love

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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