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Small Pain in My Chest

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Meadowmuse
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25 posted 06-22-2000 10:21 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

A favorite of mine, as well, dear sir.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


26 posted 06-22-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

This one gets a small ballot in the chest
Parker
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... the old black rum


27 posted 06-22-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Well there ya go and make a grown man cry. You write these poems to make men cry, bring us down to our basic element. Well It a good thing I'm holding it in or I'd forget to vote.

Parker
Isis
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28 posted 06-23-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Yep, yep, yep wonderful stuff hon  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

linda munday
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29 posted 06-23-2000 01:44 AM       View Profile for linda munday   Email linda munday   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for linda munday

Balladeer,
That little box has just been checked for this one.
You have amazing talent.  I wish I could write like that.
You have set a goal for me, higher than I am afraid I can ever reach, but at least I'll have fun trying.
Linda M.
Mike
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30 posted 06-26-2000 12:57 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

ditto to the above.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


31 posted 06-30-2000 03:14 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Excellant Balladeer!!!! my vote for such a talented man!!!
Jeffrey Carter
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State of constant confusion!


32 posted 06-30-2000 03:40 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Ok, I give up on trying to decide my favorite of yours, it's just too damn' hard LOL
The last line in this one grabs you and shakes you to the very core.....extremely excellent

All my love,
Jeffrey

Yu Lan
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33 posted 07-01-2000 03:55 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

wow.. woops, I just realised I was holding my breath, lol.. ^_^

this is geat..



Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu


Jamie
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Blue Heaven


34 posted 07-01-2000 05:38 AM       View Profile for Jamie   Email Jamie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Jamie's Home Page   View IP for Jamie

Rather than to add another comment I shall simply *vote*
Cerenity
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35 posted 07-13-2000 04:17 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

This is wonderful, you have brought reality in to this so perfectly, thank you so much.

Love,  Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)
T
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36 posted 07-13-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for T   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for T

Man!! I seem to have this big apple stuck in my throat.
Geoffrey Sonnen
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37 posted 07-13-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for Geoffrey Sonnen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Geoffrey Sonnen

You know, Honestly I can't even find words. Your last verse floored me. I am in tears. More than just moving, it bespeaks what needs to be acknowledged, the giving your Life, your Heart, for what you believe, and compels one to wonder what all this hate, and the pain and loss that it causes is for.
You definitely have my vote.

Peace,  Geoffrey  
Romy
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38 posted 07-13-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for Romy   Email Romy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Romy

you have my vote! This is really wonderful!
Debbie
Irish Rose
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39 posted 07-13-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Bravo, Michael, Bravo!

Kathleen
MagnoliaBlue
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40 posted 07-13-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for MagnoliaBlue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MagnoliaBlue

Deep feelings here...I will just ditto all the other wonderful remarks, dry my tears and go vote.
Wonderful! Fantastic writing here!
MagnoliaBlue


~My Skipper Jim
I love you!
Your Lady June~
AVANTI
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INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE


41 posted 07-13-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

great piece of work as always...


If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Nan
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42 posted 07-23-2000 09:08 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

It's always my fault...
Fred Hobbs
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43 posted 07-23-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs

Balladeer,

This has always been one of my favorites.  Yout got my vote (again!).

fh
Gossamerwings
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44 posted 07-23-2000 12:57 PM       View Profile for Gossamerwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gossamerwings

Balladeer, This is SUPERB!
The style,the flow,the words,
everything.
You do this so well.


Gossamerwings ;)
Heather Miller
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45 posted 07-24-2000 10:46 AM       View Profile for Heather Miller   Email Heather Miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Heather Miller's Home Page   View IP for Heather Miller

This made me cry to remember the stories my grandfather would tell about when he was in war and all his friends that fell.
LITL,
Heather
PS VOTED

With God all things are possible.
Heather Miller
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46 posted 07-24-2000 10:54 AM       View Profile for Heather Miller   Email Heather Miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Heather Miller's Home Page   View IP for Heather Miller

one more thing, would you mind if I printed this out to go in our local paper for all to see here? It would be loved!!!!!!!
LITL,
Heather

With God all things are possible.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


47 posted 07-24-2000 10:55 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

{~,^}

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA


48 posted 07-24-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*Applauding as she clicks vote, vote, vote* Balladeer...this has always been one of my favorite of all your works and still remains so. An excellent piece of writing my dear friend  
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


49 posted 08-03-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Another bump!
 
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