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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) A spring shower was cause to run Until you twirled me in the rain The glow of the moon announced the day was done Until it became a lover's domain A rainbow was a only a colorful view Until it’s arch drew hope in my skies The stars were reserved for a midnight debut Until I saw them in your soft loving eyes A poem was just a talented rhyme Until you wove one just for me A moment was a blink in time Until you shared a few with me My soul was a dwelling for fears Until you promised you would stay My eyes only knew the sadness of tears Until your tender kiss took them all away Love was a license for pain Until you surrounded me in a loving glow Alone was what I wanted to remain Until your heart I came to know |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
looky the second stanza first line yuh....i love it pure and simple and so involved i love it |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ohh I just LOVE getting my way  next time dont make me beg LOL you already KNOW I LOVE this winged beauty it BELONGS here...to reflect the beautiful poet who penned it  |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
yup I hafta agree, I like it!  ~Heather |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You know how I feel about this one, or do I have to tell you again.  I love it.God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Now THIS is a poem I can relate to big style Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I loved this poem......it is just beautiful and it has my vote.... Julie :) |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Very lovely. Particularly liked this stanza: "A poem was just a talented rhyme Until you wove one just for me A moment was a blink in time Until you shared a few with me" Sentimental thoughts. Pete |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
some things are even better the second time around love this poem girl...needed it tonite. jm |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Look what I found!!! Simply beautiful. Bonnie |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was really beautiful Butterflies ... a wonderful submission for the book! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
I would have to agree with everyone. This is beautiful. Good writting LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
your poetry has come highly recomended to me now I see why, this is excellent, such an uplifting way to look at love wonderful feelings and images peace and poetry my sister is the poet I am but a shadow by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Thank you all from the bottom of my heart for your kind words...they truly mean more than the votes ever could~ |
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