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The Destiny Train

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insect
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0 posted 06-20-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for insect


    DESTINY TRAIN

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!                              
CHOO! CHOO!                                                                        
I feel the train rolling down the track
Screeching wheels and people standing back                      
                                                                                      
CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!          
TOOT! TOOT!
The whistle blows a steam engine's laughter
All aboard! For happily ever after                      

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
CHOO! CHOO!
I miss my love and I want her back
Longing for her love on this endless track

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
CHOO! CHOO!
A golden ring echoes her name
This mighty engine, my destiny train                          

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
CHOO! CHOO!
A million miles of plains and tunneled mountains
My heart pumps fresh as spring feed fountains

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!  
CHOO! CHOO!
A thousand towns passed along the way
My love grows stronger each and everyday

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
TOOT! TOOT!
The whistle blows as the mighty train slows
My love is waiting, the purest winter rose

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!  
CHOO! CHOO!
She said I do and I said the same
Happily ever after on the destiny train

© Copyright 2000 insect - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you


1 posted 06-21-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Insect~ all I can say is.....*voted*   -SEA
bsquirrel
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2 posted 06-21-2000 02:40 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Insect, thanks for the buzz. That was REAALLLY stupid. Okay, I'll say this. Love the "winter rose." Reminds me of a poem I wrote a long while back, with the quote "winter bees drop dead in white honey." Wow, that has insects in it, too. Okay, I'm going to shut up now, and vote.

Mike
Parker
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3 posted 06-21-2000 05:59 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Ok, my votes in, this is a cool idea, for a bug.

So bee, find's purest winter rose.... some pollination going on here....

Parker
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 06-21-2000 06:08 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Clever and well penned Insect ... ya left me smilin'       (click)

Best wishes,
/Kit
X Angel
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5 posted 06-21-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

what fun to read this to a child!

I like!
~Heather
insect
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6 posted 06-21-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

SEA…Thank you SEA very much I can't wait to see all
            the poets from passions in this wonderful idea
            for a book. This book will be as big as the SEA!

Bsquirrel…Thanks Mike LOL's. I love comments like that
                   and any other kind relating to insects or anything
                   in the world around them. Thanks for flying on to
                   the Destiny Train from that Rocky cliff! LOL  

Haleyja…Thanks for the comet Haley! I mean comment!Haley

Kit McCallum…Thank you Kit I did work hard on this one (click)
                           Do you hear a train coming?  

X Angel…Thank you so much! A nice message for future poets.
                  I hope they have fun with it! Please let me know, it's
                  great to see kids laugh and smile!  
Novacaine For The Soul
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7 posted 06-21-2000 11:33 PM       View Profile for Novacaine For The Soul   Email Novacaine For The Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Novacaine For The Soul

dear insect,
     i'm honestly not quite sure why, but this poem grabbed me somehow... it's got my vote for the book...

sincerely,
a sad tomato

you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you...
Colin
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8 posted 06-22-2000 07:46 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

*running about shouting "WOO-WOO!!" *

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.
insect
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9 posted 06-25-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Novacaine For The
Soul                        …thank you very much for the tomato!

Eric Williams…Quick! Jump for it!!


Thanks for taking a ride on the Destiny Train


[This message has been edited by insect (edited 06-25-2000).]
Christopher J
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10 posted 06-26-2000 05:56 AM       View Profile for Christopher J   Email Christopher J   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher J

Yep, No doubts about voting for this one Insect..well done!
insect
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11 posted 07-06-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Christopher J…All aboard! Looks like you’re the only
                          one today sir! Would you care to ride
                          first class as usual? Thank you sir and
                          thank you for taking the Destiny Train.
insect
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12 posted 08-02-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

All aboard! For happily ever after
dgvarner
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13 posted 08-02-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

  this is so sweet..i love the "destiny train" idea!

enjoyed reading  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

insect
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14 posted 08-04-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

dgvarner…Thank you for riding the Destiny Train
                   May all your dreams be on the Destiny Train  
ethome
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15 posted 08-05-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Wow you're rolling on your bogies Insect I got to vote for this one it's great!
insect
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16 posted 08-06-2000 03:22 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
CHOO! CHOO!
The mighty train screeches through a turn
Loves tight corners helped by bogies as we learn
kat
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17 posted 08-09-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for kat   Email kat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kat

Insect:  This train is pretty full and not only that! I think I just missed it!!!
Umm!! Wait!! Wait for Pickles!! lmao!

Loved the way you've written this one! It was fun to read and I enjoyed it alot!  

kat
insect
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18 posted 08-09-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

I'm waiting for you in the food car!
Are you hungry? Pickles!!
Glad  your on the Destiny Train!
Let's rock and roll!!
CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA! CHUGA!
TOOT! TOOT!



[This message has been edited by insect (edited 08-09-2000).]
Tiziano
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19 posted 08-10-2000 10:26 AM       View Profile for Tiziano   Email Tiziano   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiziano

Interesting concept.
Tiziano
insect
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20 posted 12-23-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

Tiziano…Thank you
                 The Destiny Train is always ready to roll
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