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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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A Voice I'm sitting in this boat sailing across the sea the tides that rocked me gently are turbulent now. I don't know where I am which way do I go? This is not supposed to happen to me I'm scared can anybody help me? Nobody around to help I'm all alone I hear a voice where's it coming from? It's telling me I'm not alone I hear it say, relax and I will guide you. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Nice job, gloria... enjoyed much! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
If we'd all just listen.....  good'un ~Heather |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wonderful poem... it offers brilliant insight to a persons soul if only they listen.  great job!"Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nicely done, Gloria! Very comforting! Denise |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
I hope you listened well Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank you all kindly, I appreciate your reading and replying. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LD~ Very spiritual...lovely read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
People should always listen to their hearts. Thanks for the reminder coz it's easy to forget. Linda M. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
just lovely... as always chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Enjoyed the 'sail' ... Very nice thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thanks again, I appreciate very much. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
good poem... well written... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Beautiful poem M'Lady. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
LD - Wonderful poem, great ending. We only need to listen! Bonnie |
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