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Life's Songs

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Marge Tindal
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Life's Songs
~*Marge Tindal*~

Life sings of us the songs of mirth
The sweetest song,  life - giving birth
Aria of our youth sung in sweet surprise
Within our hearts soon harmonized

Sings of us through all our days
Joyous melodies sung with praise
Melody of hearts so tender
Pitch us now in sweet surrender

Song of another pierces our soul
Singing love until we're old
Life sings of us sweet lullabies
Kisses us softly then says goodbye

Within a heart our song returning
Hummed now in a heart of mourning
It matters much the song life sings
Caught in the joy of remembering

Life sings of us
sweet lullabies
Kisses us softly
then says
goodbye




© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 06-20-2000 05:51 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This is a wonderful choice Marge!  So tender and melodic, such a beautiful poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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2 posted 06-20-2000 06:03 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Beautiful Marge!! I think it is really brilliant!

Love and hugs,
Lil' Lizzie


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Christopher
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3 posted 06-20-2000 06:28 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Ahh m'dear, full circle... as ever life must be. You've done it again Marge, made me smile that soft smile and whisper that gentle sigh.
EagleOne
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4 posted 06-20-2000 07:15 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Life sings of us
sweet lullabies
Kisses us softly
then says
goodbye

Yes! Indeed it does marge, lovely work....as always.  

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown




[This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 06-20-2000).]
Justbleu
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5 posted 06-20-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

Marge what lovely words here!!  Life sings many different songs!!  Nice!!

Bridgette


"Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side
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6 posted 06-20-2000 09:00 AM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

I like! Great job as always Marge  
~Heather
Janet Marie
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7 posted 06-20-2000 09:09 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Lovely and wisdom filled...
the poetic circle of life
perfect choice to reflect your wonderful talent...
jm
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with you


8 posted 06-20-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Marge~ I haven't read a poem of yours that hasn't touched my heart!!! You need to get more in here to be voted on!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB

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9 posted 06-20-2000 09:43 AM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Oh Marge, This is so beautiful...tears are flowing now.  A dear friend of mine passed away just yesterday, and this was such a perfect piece to see today.  Would you mind if I shared it with the others who need to see this??  Bonnie
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This is a keeper and I vote yes!

Cor
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11 posted 06-20-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Kit~
Thank you for your many kind comments.

Lil' Lizzie~
Hugs and big thanks to you, my friend.

Christopher~
Just knowing you smile and sigh is more than enough for this lady.  Thank you.

EagleOne~
Thank you so much for your thoughtfulness.

JustBleu~
So pleased you enjoyed.

XAngel~
I'm glad you like this one.  

JanetMarie~
Thank you, hon.

SEA~
Give me time, gal.
I'm searching !  
There are so many good poets here who need to also get in on this.

BSC~
Hon, please share.
Also please accept my sincerest condolences in the loss of your friend.
*HUGS*

Corinne~
Thank you, my dear little friend.

~*Marge*~


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12 posted 06-20-2000 01:59 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Oh Marge, this is a beautiful work! We couldn't go without it being in our book!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea
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{~,^}

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

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Indeed--mind if I sing a little harmony here?  Or at least do a little back-up singing?  Love ya, mom...
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Lovely, lilting.....I like this a lot, Marge!  
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This is very lovely, Marge!  
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sisboomba i love this ya!
Jeffrey Carter
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All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep




[This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 06-21-2000).]
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19 posted 06-21-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

As a rule, squirrels love the songs of deer. Especially deer who write so eloquently about both sadness and happiness, and life. Thanks for the gift.

Mike
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20 posted 06-21-2000 04:02 AM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

Marge,
I love your wonderful style and perspective of things--I don't think the book would be complete without one of your poems in it--This one is a good choice,  David
Sudhir Iyer
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21 posted 06-21-2000 04:24 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

lilting, lovely, beautiful and many more adjectives are hereby reserved for your poem, Marge...and its a treat and a visual delight to read each one of them...

regards, sudhir.
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I'd probably vote on anything of your Marge, and this is a wonderful choice. Very Nice.  

Parker
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Marge~
Your work always shines with such beauty and this my friend truly shines  
Lovely Marge
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Elizabeth Santos
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24 posted 06-21-2000 06:05 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marge, There are so many of your poems that could go in this book, but this is a wonderful choice

Liz
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