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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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You The subtle innocence of a simple smile The look in your unknowing eyes. How I wish I could stand in your place, Give you everything I’ve already had. The love of a woman, The care of a child. For with each day that passes I will think of you and everything you have given me. I have more than love for you You are my being. You are the light that has kept my direction. And in me you shall live forever For there is no love stronger than ours. Go forth into the arms of god For his care is the only other I can trust Live on in the eternal light And burn so in my heart forever No fever so high No chill so cold could ever replace the hurt I feel for you You are the beat in my heart and the blood in my veins And I will long for you always Go without pain but with the knowing that I Love You. You will always be the part that I once had but am missing I will feel your breath at night and hear your voice whisper to me That you are there at my side protecting me from the fear of being without you. There is no just end to my words For this is an eternal vow You will live in me forever. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Very sweet....  Keep up the great work ~Heather |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"I will feel your breath at night and hear your voice whisper to me That you are there at my side protecting me from the fear of being without you." The bittersweet sting of letting go is sometimes the greatest indication of love. This is very special, as it is clearly written from your heart. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
my god, this is beautiful... this poem is absolutely breathtaking... pure poetic perfection If you posted this here before my tired eyes missed it... but it is like sunshine on my face today... amazing words and emotions unconditional love and dedication a testimony and tribute to undying love (forgive my worshiping..this one got to me)  take care jm |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Gorgeous--sincere, and simply moving...written straight from the heart... Love it, Rich... |
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lvableomia New Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1 |
Your poem was very interesting and I am sure that it came straight from the depths of your soul...Keep up the great writing of your poems... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you X Angel Claire The simple thought of the loss can be devastating. Thanks for your support JM Tis great to strike such a soft spot with such a strong feeling. Thank You Serenity you are my strongest inspiration and do well to push as you do ((HUGS)) lvableomia Thank you and I will |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Quick note: This was written for a child dying and in need of marrow. The child has had the marrow and Is Alive and doing very well with medication. Just thought that the Cheerful thought might be well appreciated |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow spiked one hard in my heart with this one yuh |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
"You are the beat in my heart and the blood in my veins".... Loved your poem... I can see the eternal depth of love in this one. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks wayoutwalt Great to have your support |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Fantastic one...sometimes we pass through so many trials but to win over all those..and still keep love burning in you..espeacially when we are away..amazing.. Sincerely A_L |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you very much Linda A_L Great to share such a feeling with my fellow poets Rich |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
A very heartfelt poem and I'm glad to hear the good news  Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you eric |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Spiked a beautiful poem. very tender. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Amen. Mike |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
BTT... |
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