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Corazon
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25 posted 07-18-2000 12:27 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

ok one more vote won't make this any more outstanding, but I have to put my vote on this.....incredible!
  If I were sun,
  and you were dew,
  I could not, would not,
  diminish you.

  I'd reverse all laws of universe,
  if only just to breathe your breath.


this makes me remember when I felt like this...sigh...great writing serentiy...wow



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ethome
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26 posted 07-18-2000 01:30 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Beautiful and elegant. Definite poetic experience all the way through. My vote is yours....Take care...
Sven
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27 posted 07-19-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Just wonderful my friend. . . just wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Heather Miller
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28 posted 07-19-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for Heather Miller   Email Heather Miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Heather Miller's Home Page   View IP for Heather Miller

AWSOME, BEAUTIFUL
I'm new here but what I have read so far has REALLY touched me. There is so much emotion here.
I also love how you all support eachothers work  )
LITL,
Heather Anne Miller/Gambler


With God all things are possible.
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


29 posted 08-03-2000 11:27 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

My turn! (and you thought I'd missed it!)  
Martie
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30 posted 08-03-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Wonderful writing, Serenity!
Majestic
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31 posted 08-04-2000 12:40 AM       View Profile for Majestic   Email Majestic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Majestic

Very Sensual..lovely poem..

"To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~


dgvarner
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32 posted 08-05-2000 05:00 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

very romantic  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

Yu Lan
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33 posted 08-05-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

Mmm.. what a poem! *_^ yeah, I LOVE your ending to this.. gotta be sweet.. hehe..

"If I were sun,
  and you were dew,
  I could not, would not,
  diminish you.

  I'd reverse all laws of universe,
  if only just to breathe your breath"

votevotevote!!

Luv,


Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu
(Please e-mail me at yu_lan_wen_@hotmail.com instead of the e-ma
shadow of poetry
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34 posted 08-06-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for shadow of poetry   Email shadow of poetry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shadow of poetry

oh my gosh this is the most cool poem
goodness i just love the way you write them
out long form
it really adds the the emotions
sis told me i would dig your work
she was right
peace & poetry
lil sis

my sister is the poet
I am but a shadow
by the light of poetry
I read then dream
Janet Marie
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35 posted 06-13-2004 02:29 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Doing the birthday bump from me library of rhyme divine Sen keepers.
Its your day..the forums shall be your marquee
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


36 posted 06-13-2004 04:41 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

YES!!!!!!!   Gleeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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