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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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SNOWFLAKE Gently the snow falls, as i recall, Every memory, with every snowflake, For each is unique, made of a different design, Some melt fast, some melt before their time, See how beautiful and white, Glowing and glisten in the light, Falling from heaven, Like angels above, Holy and pure, Each wrapped with love, If I could be a snowflake, I would fly to you and land upon your lips, I would moisten them with my life, as I melt away, Sacrificing my life for your joy, my happiness to you for a day, I would glow and glisten, Shine my love all around, Bring smiles upon your face, and take away your frown, So each time a snowflake will fall, remember me as you recall, This little snowflake poem I wrote for you, To brighten your days of saddness, and to say I love you too! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 06-19-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is so tender and sweet Romantic Heart! It flows so gently, and carries such lovely sentiments, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I could see this on a winter greeting card... Nice! ~Heather |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
awwwwwwwwww  Sweet like a sugar coated snowflake!Eric "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is so pretty! It's got my vote! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Miss Romantic One, this is a very pretty piece!! Snowflakes are amazing things!! I'm from Alaska and know the beauty of them!! Well way to write about the uniqueness and beauty of a snowflake!! I have enjoyed your poetry I've read!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
As pretty as you are. Hey, you think I'm not gonna comment on the photograph, you got another thing coming! Thanks for sharing (your words AND your picture).Mike |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Mr. Mike for both compliments and for reading and commenting on my poems |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
This is sweet and indeed made my heart here weep a poem that I shall keep for I felt it within my heart so deep The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you Helmut for that sweet little poem!! |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Such a sweet and tender poem, just beautiful. Bonnie |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
very nice. Enjoyed your poem as I always enjoy your style of writing. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love it too! Very beautifully done! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RomanticHeart~ A sweet read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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danny Junior Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 18 |
BRIGHTENS THE SPIRIT, SIMPLY THANK YOU SHE COULD SEE WHERE I WAS BLIND AND HEAL MY WOUNDS BY TAKING TIME |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks for the support guys! and Welcome Danny! |
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