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since 05-12-2000
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25 posted 06-23-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Words can not express that emotions you pen so well within this work. I'm in awe of your poetic skills. This is truly touching and very say the very least. I want someone to love me that way!!! WOW!!! LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!! Thank you for sharing.  

I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.  
  Michel de Montaigne

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26 posted 06-23-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

I loved this the first time around, and I still love it. It must be published!  

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea
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27 posted 06-23-2000 09:42 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

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28 posted 06-23-2000 09:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Janet Marie!  

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29 posted 06-24-2000 01:21 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

JM, This is absolutley beautiful!!! Loved it!  

My grief lies onward and my joy behind
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30 posted 06-24-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Erotic and beautiful. You can't go wrong with that combination, Butterfly Slippers. Yum!  

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31 posted 06-24-2000 01:30 AM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Well.. THERE you are!! I knew you had one in here somewhere... hehe

too late for a vote? I hope not---
A passionate and meaningful work!
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32 posted 06-24-2000 06:32 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

This is so beautiful..everything you wrote I can relate to and it's what I'd do as well...very deeply written, the depth of the love here shines through.. well done

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

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33 posted 06-24-2000 07:02 AM       View Profile for AVANTI   Email AVANTI   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AVANTI

great poem as always...

If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

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34 posted 06-24-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

great job janet

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

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35 posted 06-29-2000 12:27 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Janet, this was one of my favorites.  Great writing.
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36 posted 07-13-2000 01:21 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Janet,

Wonderful-Awesome-Moocho Enjoyed-Loved It,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)
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37 posted 07-13-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for Ethan Halo   Email Ethan Halo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ethan Halo's Home Page   View IP for Ethan Halo

hey, i'd vote for you  without readin!
but i did read it, and i'm damn glad i did. i remember feeling this way about someone. it's an awesome feeling, but it can get crummy too. but as was stated above, this is a masterpiece. it is genius-ly composed, my friend. to book with you!

"The bar is always open
and the time is always right.
If god's word goes unspoken,
then the music plays all night."

-Bradley Nowell

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38 posted 07-13-2000 05:46 PM       View Profile for Geoffrey Sonnen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Geoffrey Sonnen

Janet, I am not exaggerating in the slightest, this, your Heart's expression, is just incredible. I travel with you in deep empathy, our Hearts, our yearnings coincide. Have no doubt about my vote. My gratitude in sharing this with us, with me. Hope you don't mind my printing this, probably more than once. Need to share this with others. Again my thanks.
                   God Bless,  Geoff
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39 posted 07-14-2000 12:38 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

How dumb am I??????  I have seen this for days and I remember it from Open......thought I had already posted to it!!!!  DAAAAAAA!!!!!!!  LOL

My vote!!!!!


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
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40 posted 07-14-2000 08:35 AM       View Profile for jamesjiao   Email jamesjiao   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit jamesjiao's Home Page   View IP for jamesjiao

This experience is very unique to a person's life. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.

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41 posted 07-15-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

wonderful poem... add one more vote to the list.
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42 posted 07-18-2000 08:23 AM       View Profile for ma miller   Email ma miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ma miller

beautiful work, jm ... these words have a spirit all their own ... another vote for "Unrequited" ...
Mark Bohannan
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43 posted 07-21-2000 11:10 AM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

To have one that would be willing to give as you have inside would be this man's dream.  I bow to your talent for one but on hands and knees I am to the size of your heart.  This is what love is about and in all aspects of life and all levels.
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44 posted 07-21-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for Heather Miller   Email Heather Miller   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Heather Miller's Home Page   View IP for Heather Miller

Oh Yeah ONE FOR THE BOOK!!!!!!!!!!     
Very touching. Hope you don't mind if I send it to someone?
PS Cant say enough, IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!

With God all things are possible.
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45 posted 07-22-2000 04:42 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

You've described unrequited love so well.....that longing is so easy to see
hope all is well with you my friend and I'm sending a big hug your way  
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46 posted 07-24-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for shadow of poetry   Email shadow of poetry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for shadow of poetry

by far my most favorite of yours
(though that is becoming impossible to choose)
it speaks of your poetic heart and soul
it is just, that this be my first post in here
thank you for sharing this place and your gift with me
luv you

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47 posted 07-24-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for juliet_2u   Email juliet_2u   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for juliet_2u

Janet, you touched the very core of my heart. I'm speechless. My emotions are going crazy right now. I'm living the very words you wrote. Thank you for that gift in verse.
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48 posted 07-25-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Janet what a beauty this one is. I am so impressed that I'm going to vote right now. Excellent! one of your best ever...ethome..
Janet Marie
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49 posted 08-08-2000 12:21 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

thank you to ALL who voted for this and
wrote such amazing and knowing replies.
this is one of my personal favs.
take care sweet poets
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