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i saw her in the rain

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BSC
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25 posted 06-25-2000 09:38 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Can't think of any other words than have already been mentioned here....this is simply an awesome poem.  Bonnie
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26 posted 06-26-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Not to worry, Balladeer -- drunk on my own optimism, I have submitted 6 in this forum: i am goodbye, i saw her in the rain, scaled velvet, A Dark sunday, contemporary prayerbook, and through a cracked pane.

Bonnie, thank you. You have a cool little icon. Mine was You Are Here at the very beginning, then it somehow switched to the right-downward arrow. Now I'm not even sure if I have one anymore. Oh well.  

Mike

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27 posted 06-26-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Excellent - I really enjoyed reading this!
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28 posted 06-26-2000 10:41 AM       View Profile for Not A Poet   Email Not A Poet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Not A Poet's Home Page   View IP for Not A Poet

I'm with everyone else here. I really enjoyed this one and its almost supernatural feel.

Thanks,
Pete
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29 posted 06-26-2000 11:21 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Moonshine and Pete (sounds like it could be a show on Nickelodeon), glad you enjoyed, and thanks for taking the time to reply. I definitely appreciate it.

Mike
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30 posted 06-30-2000 03:07 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Oh I liked this very much, the rain always casts a somber mood...
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31 posted 07-01-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Thanks, Romantic Heart. Again, this poem came from reading way too much of Lord of the Rings, with all the sad, somber yet beautiful songs of worlds gone by. I really like this poem, too, and that's sort of rare with me.

Thanks for your vote.

Mike
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32 posted 07-13-2000 04:27 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Mike,

This one is a jem, very much enjoyed, wonderful poetry here.

Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

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33 posted 07-13-2000 05:44 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

This is quite exceptional sir
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34 posted 07-14-2000 12:06 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Thanks, Cerenity and Jeffrey (that sorta rhymes). I appreciate it!

Mike
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35 posted 07-14-2000 06:31 AM       View Profile for Romy   Email Romy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Romy

Very nice, so glad you shared it!
Debbie
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36 posted 07-14-2000 08:25 AM       View Profile for jamesjiao   Email jamesjiao   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit jamesjiao's Home Page   View IP for jamesjiao

Well well well, with a sly smile, I say, this is good. If rain of romance is coupled with roses, much better

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.


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37 posted 08-13-2000 03:19 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

To both d and j, thanks.
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38 posted 10-05-2000 06:30 AM       View Profile for Broken_Winged_Angel   Email Broken_Winged_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Broken_Winged_Angel's Home Page   View IP for Broken_Winged_Angel

Sweet.  

With a little piece of tomorrow,
You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye.
Because today won't last forever,
And the past will only make you cry.
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39 posted 05-22-2002 04:05 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Much appreciated. It's been a loooong while since ah've read this poem again -- much less remembered it correctly.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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40 posted 07-27-2002 10:52 AM       View Profile for Anvrill   Email Anvrill   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anvrill's Home Page   View IP for Anvrill

Y'know, baby? It didn't strike me when I first read it, since it wasn't that prominent for either of us then... But this is soooo thematically similar to A Forest. It's like a soggy version of the song.

You rock my world, lovely.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

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41 posted 07-28-2002 04:40 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

I like th' new pet name.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

 
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