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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Leaves alone Fear unknown Searching for the rose Lost Blackness draws near Crashing through leaves Warmth lies in shadows Strange among these trees Unfamiliar to the eye A rose Impossible to see Secluded in an image Beneath obscurity Through the gloom Fading from view Slipping Forever passed Vanished "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Justbleu~ this is so pretty! I really liked this one!  -SEA |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
such a beautiful display of something so simple as a rose. Wonderfully done. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
it took me a minute to catch on (slow today I am), but when I did, I enjoyed it. Ty for the read ~Heather |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i like this book thing yuh it gives me a chance to read all kinds of great and diversified entries... yuh good poem o yuh |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
And a rose has blossomed in this forum through your words Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
 Thank You, everyone!! I'm happy you've enjoyed it so much!!Bridgette |
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Christopher J Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 94 |
The best things in life are often hidden, we have to search for them...this poem is great. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Christopher J....some of the best in life are well hidden...usually right under our own noses!!!! Thanks!!"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Bridgette! I like this one read backwards too! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyed your poetry. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Denise she really got you started with the reading of poetry backwards.....that's cool!! Well, when you said you did, I did too!! LOL!! Thank You so much!! Thank You too Mike for enjoying my poetry!!! Bridgette |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Simply beautiful, I read it backwards too, loved every line both ways. Bonnie |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful poem. Enjoyed it much ! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Yes, beauty often goes unnoticed.. thank you for reminding us. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lovely!! A rose isn't always a rose though hey! voted! loved it Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful writing, miss |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I don't know what to say!! Thank You!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu~ Lovely, lovely, lovely. ~*Marge*~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You sooo much Marge!!! "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
I guess I missed this one first time around. I like it very much. Thanks, Pete |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very beautiful. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Not a Poet I'm glad you had a chance to read!! Thanks!! And Heather Thank You too!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How fast the good poems pass us by when we blink... by the way, the scent of your rose still lingers... well done! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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