dear elizabeth santos, *wipes away a tear* oh my, this poem is so incredibly touching... this absolutely must be in the book... it seems your fans have secured you a spot already, simply wanted to throw my vote in
sincerely, a sad tomato
you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you...
How could I have missed this one before now? This has to be one of the most beautiful and touching poems I can remember ever. I was really getting into the story until she took the letter to her father. I wondered how she could do that. Then the twist at the end brought a real tear.
Elizabeth Santos~ As much as I love this one - I want to see you submit my favorite ! ! It's 'Same Time - Next Life' ... pretty please ! Love ya' gal ... wish I was in California with you ... I'd go see Martie (she's my sister of love) and my sister, Lori ... my sister of birth and love !
I know your family is happy having you and Tony there. Love ya' ~*Marge*~
~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ firstname.lastname@example.org
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