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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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In my dreams Envoloped in darkness Within a house That intended to portray The house of the dead Never seen in reality Ominous and cold A basket with clothes Belonging to my Grandfather Laying near the place of flames Awake I could see all of this Right in front of me I heard chattering of voices Looking up I saw outside There were familar faces Only two I wanted to see The others do not matter to me My Grandparents with love Aunt, Uncle and Cousins Not vanishing away A few moments later They entered the darkness Grandmother sits in a chair Beckons to me to come I am not a child This running through my veins She says sit on my lap I do as she asks Not understanding Not wanting to stay I woke up right then And wanted to pray That I would never have another Of these dreams come my way "Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This would be a wonderful addition to the book!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
definitely eerie stuff kewl! ~H |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
good stuff i likes! |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
I love a good scary tale! Nice work Eric. |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
This really is more than just a good description of a dream. It feels like a real dream. Great job of presenting the image here. Thanks. Pete |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Kinda eerie, eh?? A real dream, hmm, maybe!! Thanks all of you!! This one is out of my comfort zone of the "mushy love stuff"!! Not a love poem!!  Bridgette [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 06-23-2000).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very well done I enjoy poems done in this fashion |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, it justbleu me away in its presentation! My vote's in |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Cool Rex...I enjoyed writing this one it's different for me!! Happy you liked it!! Thank You!!!!!  Balladeer Guy, sir!! I don't know what to say!!! Thanks!!!!"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Haunting dream, beautifully written. Bonnie |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You bunches...Bonnie!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Very cool writting, My son would love this one. LITL, Heather With God all things are possible. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
That's great...Thanks!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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