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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
WindowpanesMorning sky in heavy languish, maiden moist with aching air as a broiling roll of canvas, once alive with passion's care for what long was daily drama, now hangs, is simply bare. What became of all my cloudy days of dreaming? Where might my lover tread, so ever solemnly to roam while I, now fallen futile to the honor of nights alone, gaze out from leaden windowpanes, only words to make my home. Who shall come to ease my blood from sorrow's steaming? ~ Claire |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
meadowmuse i have missed you yuh very good a winner i say |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"while I, now fallen futile to the honor of nights alone," Oh how often I gaze through the window panes ... pondering, musing ... very nicely written Claire! Best wishes, /Kit |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Why do they even need a vote counter for your poems???? lol..you got mine. chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Claire~ Always so amazing!  -SEA |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes! This is marvelous poetry.  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
From forth your pen flows such beauty. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely choice for the book - Claire, be seeing you there! ~netswan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Im enjoying this new forum so much as its like a window on all the poets hearts... getting to see which ones they pick as their personal favs... this one is a perfect reflection of you. though with so many perfect poems ... I dont how you could choose... jm |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Oh I adored this..it was medieval-ish romantic-ish *sigh*-invoking-ish wunnerful-wunnerful-wunnerful ~H |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
you could put up a hundred poems and I would vote for every one love your writing |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
You're writing is nothing less than pure beauty.. everything I've read by you is worthy of a vote and this is no exception! Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Claire, yes you are pure poetry. You have too many and I'd vote on all of them..  Parker |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Words that ring like music to my ears. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Joining your fanclub, Claire....don't be gone so long next time...I actually started to write you a poem about missing the muse of the meadow, but I thought you might think me a bit strange...(or stranger,whatever...) smiles to you.... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
*Smiling and sighing* Ooh Meadowmuse, absolute perfection! You continue to be high on my list of favorite poets here and no book would be complete without one of your gorgeous pieces! (needless to say, you have my vote!) *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear meadowmuse, what a magnificent introduction to a poet who i'm sure is destined to become one of my favorites also... this is wonderful work... sincerely, a sad tomato you're such a beautiful freak... i wish there were more just like you... |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
This was beautiful. I loved it .~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Wonderful writing here. Voted Jon |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Claire! How beautiful. You have my vote ^_^ Amanda "Come what come may, time and the hour runs through the roughest day." A line from Macbeth, by William Shakespear |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
Seeing as you've called this poem "Windowpanes" and seeing as I'm in a bratty mood, I've gotta do it..... SMASHING poem Claire Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just beautiful Claire. . . I've always liked this one. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Bravo L.a.S.P. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Poetry at its finest! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful, Claire............. In order to keep a true perspective of one's importance, everyone should have a dog that will worship him and a cat that will ignore him. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Well I don't think you need my vote ... But here it is anyway |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Great piece of poetry Liz |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
Oooh, another goodie... *baffled* How do you do it? Geir -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Where might my lover tread, so ever solemnly to roam while I, now fallen futile to the honor of nights alone, gaze out from leaden windowpanes, wow Claire a stunning poem, wonderfully written. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Exceptional writing, Claire...the only way you know how to write. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Thank you, ALL, in earnest for such kind and touching replies to this little poem...such gracious comments leave my heart humbled before you. Thank you ... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi I'm glad I did not miss this one, very, very nice work here so much ejoyed. Cerenity |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ So delicately fragile these words. Stunning. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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