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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2000-06-17 02:44 PM


Ruler of my Heart

Ruler of my heart, what could that be...
Love-sweet, innocent and rosy?
No, love can give way to pain,
If it were love, I would go slowly insane.

Ruler of my heart, who takes that seat...
Gaiety and joy, pure and complete?
No, joy can so easily be taken away,
If it were joy, I wouldn’t last a day.

Ruler of my heart, whose honor to claim...
Could it be a passionate flame?
No, a flame too easily burns out,
If it were a flame of passion, I’d have nought.

Ruler of my heart, I know who you are!
I see you every time I look at the stars.
It is you, my God, the creator of all,
With you ruling my heart, I will ever stand tall.




"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

© Copyright 2000 ESP - All Rights Reserved
LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-06-17 03:25 PM


ESP, this is wonderful! Have you posted this before? If you did, I must have missed it. I'm glad I caught it again!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Isis
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2 posted 2000-06-17 06:21 PM


Loved it in poetry challenge and love it now.
I 'vote' this goes in the book!!  

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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3 posted 2000-06-17 06:27 PM


Ruler of my heart, who takes that seat...
Gaiety and joy, pure and complete?
No, joy can so easily be taken away,
If it were joy, I wouldn’t last a day.

Very well written ESP

All my love,
Jeffrey

I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep


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4 posted 2000-06-17 08:19 PM


Wonderful poem Lizzie!!! I liked it a lot.  
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5 posted 2000-06-17 10:05 PM


I loved the rhythm of this -- the sort of dip from wishes to reality, repeating. I missed this the first time it was posted, too. Glad to catch up.  

Mike

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6 posted 2000-06-18 12:57 PM


ESP, this is absolutely wonderful.  I love the idea of God being the "ruler of my heart".  I definitely agree that he is.  Truly beautiful work! Ya got my vote!

*Krista Knutson*

"Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~


"We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~

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7 posted 2000-06-18 03:20 AM


This was great!  I also loved the shift from fantasy to reality and especially the last verse.  Great ending, God is definetly the Ruler of the Heart.
Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-06-18 10:29 AM


Simply beautiful ESP, I also must have missed this in Open ... I'm so glad I caught you here.  Wonderful sentiments, and beautifully penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2000-06-18 05:33 PM


Lil' Lizzie~
A beautiful poem from your heart.
I like it very much.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2000-06-18 06:57 PM


ESP~ I really liked that it ended with God being the ruler of your heart, He is of mine too!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


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11 posted 2000-06-19 12:11 PM


this is pretty ESP like it lots yuh
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12 posted 2000-06-19 12:13 PM


ESP this is cool!!  I think this is a good poem!!

Bridgette  


"Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved." -Unknown


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13 posted 2000-06-19 12:46 PM


I too missed this one before...
its perfect and has some great phrases in it...
excellent choice to represent your work
jm

ESP
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14 posted 2000-06-20 07:25 AM


Thanks for the replies, people!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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15 posted 2000-06-20 09:05 AM


ESP  
Good'un!!!
~Heather

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16 posted 2000-06-21 12:27 PM


Wow this is so strong!!
Love it!!

Lynne


"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu


ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
17 posted 2000-06-21 06:05 AM


      

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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Fabulous  
AVANTI
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19 posted 2000-06-24 07:33 AM


great poem...
i hav'nt read you before but i liked this one a lot
see you around...


If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao


Elizabeth Santos
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20 posted 2000-06-24 10:27 AM


Lizzie,
Wonderful work, and a nice surprise this morning.
Liz

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21 posted 2000-06-30 03:22 AM


Beautiful job! enjoyed it! lovely poetry!
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22 posted 2000-07-02 04:15 AM


ESP
Good show !
I like it very much.


*If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours*



ESP
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23 posted 2000-07-02 05:07 AM


Thanks for your replies, people!!
Much appreciated...I am happy that you like it!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Mike
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24 posted 2000-07-02 07:53 AM


wonderful poetry.  Enjoyed muchly.
Colin
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25 posted 2000-07-02 11:20 AM


I just love the ending!

Eric.

"We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka.

Corinne
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26 posted 2000-07-02 11:36 AM


This is quite beautiful!

Corinne

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27 posted 2000-07-02 05:52 PM




Lizzie:

A beautiful ending, I agree    Please take my vote, my friend

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

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28 posted 2000-07-14 07:28 AM


Lil' Lizzie is off on her adventure !
I'm taking the liberty of 'BUMPING' this
for another go 'round !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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29 posted 2000-07-16 03:04 AM


Oh Lizzie beautiful poem filled with love  God bless you
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


jamesjiao
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30 posted 2000-07-16 07:32 AM


Yo, Lizzie, it's great, though I am a Christian, I was total intrigued by your poem

- James
The beauty of nature is displayed,
not through itself,
but through the creatures
dwelling within its bosom.



Geoffrey Sonnen
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31 posted 2000-07-17 01:25 PM


Very nicely written and something that more should anaylize within themselves and take heed.
          Peace to you,  Geoffrey
*vote*

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