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Tears |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Tears come unbidden to these eyes My heart calls out and for you cries That I might touch you and hold you near The one that I call “Abrabear” and “Dear” The days that have come and past Your love I have held unto fast The days that are yet to be Will be hard for you and me Miles have come and stepped between Life can be so cruel and mean To pull the two of us so far apart After we stole one another’s heart In this cold and dark twilight time Ill wrap myself in your thought and rhyme And warm myself by your loves fire Dreaming of you, my greatest desire < !signature--> Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. [This message has been edited by Der Keit (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wow Keith... I can understand why you want this read. It is a wonderful piece... and has a great subject. I can see the pain you two are going through.. life can throw nasty curves at you. I wish you two the best... and I hope you know it! Wonderfully written poem.  "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Simply Superb work!!!! Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Der Keit From tears to fire & desire. I loved it all the way through. It was excellent. I'm so glad that I can lay next to my love each night and not have to dream. Garfield |
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