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Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

0 posted 2000-09-23 02:07 AM

Expressions and impressions
on this screen your words of rhyme
Thoughts in the brightest of inks
printed permanently in my mind

Expressions and impressions
on this soundtrack you record
Tones of laughter and joy
ring in my ear with sweet accord

Expressions and impressions
on this loom you weave in gold
Strength and comforts of warmth
interlaced through out my soul

Expressions and impressions
on this paper you gently sketched
Colors of a rainbow full
in my eyes forever etched

Expressions and impressions
on this canvas you’ve brushed your art
Visions of such beauty and love
forever painted upon my heart

~Sheri

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

1 posted 2000-09-23 03:15 AM

"Expressions and impressions
on this soundtrack you record
Tones of laughter and joy
ring in my ear with sweet accord"

The sweetest lines!! I loved it!! Wonderfully written!!

sp

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-09-23 05:44 AM

Charming, very...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Tepok Bopar
Junior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 27

3 posted 2000-09-23 01:12 PM

Outstanding Irie. Very moving piece. I especially like the last four lines. Cheers, Tepok.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-09-23 04:07 PM

Excellent Irie,
this is one of your best. . . from your heart as always. . .

Well done my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2000-09-23 10:23 PM

Beautifully written..

Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

6 posted 2000-09-24 06:07 PM

Sp, I'm so glad that you enjoyed this piece. Was a bit of a change for me. Many thanks to you.

Sunshine, Thank You!

Tepok, Thank you so much. I'm happy you like.
Funny....The last four lines are the first four that I came up with. Some how they ended up in the end.

Sven, My best huh? Thanks a million for your reply! And yes, straight from my heart as always.

Victoria, Thank you so much!

~Sheri

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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7 posted 2004-06-07 12:49 PM

excellent!

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