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Expressions and Impressions

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Irie
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0 posted 09-23-2000 02:07 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Irie

Expressions and impressions
on this screen your words of rhyme
Thoughts in the brightest of inks
printed permanently in my mind

Expressions and impressions
on this soundtrack you record
Tones of laughter and joy
ring in my ear with sweet accord

Expressions and impressions
on this loom you weave in gold
Strength and comforts of warmth
interlaced through out my soul

Expressions and impressions
on this paper you gently sketched
Colors of a rainbow full
in my eyes forever etched

Expressions and impressions
on this canvas you’ve brushed your art
Visions of such beauty and love
forever painted upon my heart




~Sheri
© Copyright 2000 Sheri - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
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"Expressions and impressions
on this soundtrack you record
Tones of laughter and joy
ring in my ear with sweet accord"

The sweetest lines!!  I loved it!!  Wonderfully written!!

sp  

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Charming, very...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Tepok Bopar
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Outstanding Irie. Very moving piece. I especially like the last four lines. Cheers, Tepok.
Sven
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4 posted 09-23-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent Irie,
               this is one of your best. . . from your heart as always. . .

Well done my friend. . .

---------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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Victoria
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5 posted 09-23-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

Beautifully written..

Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.
Irie
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6 posted 09-24-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Sp, I'm so glad that you enjoyed this piece. Was a bit of a change for me. Many thanks to you.

Sunshine, Thank You!  

Tepok, Thank you so much. I'm happy you like.
Funny....The last four lines are the first four that I came up with. Some how they ended up in the end.  

Sven, My best huh? Thanks a million for your reply! And yes, straight from my heart as always.

Victoria, Thank you so much!  


~Sheri
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excellent!
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