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Passion in Cinqain
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Passion in Cinqain |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Passion in Cinqain May I Brush my two lips Upon your taut neck side Feel your pulse teasing you with tongue Worship Move down Seeking Eros Laving each round morsel Ascending, drinking from your mouth Your soul Hold firm Us together Body against body Sense the growing warmth between us Your love Move deep Finding your crux My tongue twixt your petals Feeling you give yourself to me Love you ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Wilfred, Bea-u-tiful Expression of loving Passionate, touching deeply in The heart |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
whew...it is getting  in here. She has you penning some beauties as of late. Wonderful...and BTW...there is a challenge for you since you brought it up the other night. You will find it in the challenge forum..  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done wil..as always.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--I would borrow Mark's HOT, but I don't no how to do that flame thingy...wheew...can girls take cold showers too...beautiful, by the way. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Wilfred, You have reached in and grasped the deepest passion with this piece. Very well done Sir, I so much enjoyed this. ~Sheri |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
whoa. You sure did get right down to the crux of the situation, Wilfred. Hmmm. Maybe...(serenity peers down the hall...) Naw...think I'll just read some more! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Chanson - A Cinquain Response - sweet, clever and very much appreciated Thank you Mark - Thank you - and My feeble attempt at your challenge is in #10 Vicky- Consider my words part payment for the pleasure - your works give me. Martie- I learned early - that one can edit (but not change) the responses and poems of others. thus - how to insert graphics - requires only the copy and paste trick we all know. at any rate - I'm glad you "enjoyed"  Sheri- Passion is not as valuable if it does not mean giving one's all to it (JMHO) Thank youSerenity (witch too?) - I think I learned in my earliest years (with a steak at the time) that 'the nearer the bone the sweeter the meat' thus my desire to get to the 'crux' of things ultimately  Thank you |
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