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White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland

0 posted 2000-09-22 11:07 PM


Hues of blue and brown
Eddy within my mind
Eyes focus, seeing nothing
Must of been a dream
Two heavenly bodies
And endless dance
Song of one heart
Thoughts of nothing
Imagining everything
Born of a single mind
Lost in the passion
Strength in the love
In the early morning light

The White Wolf


Would the bunny like this nice carrot? I don't bite. Much. :)

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inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
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1 posted 2000-09-22 11:23 PM


So nice, I can't wait to go to sleep just to see what happens tomorrow in the Early Morning Light.

White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
2 posted 2000-09-22 11:40 PM


Thank you.  While I wrote this from a positive standpoint I realize that it is both a blessing and a curse.  Why can't my dream be reality?  I know, I know I am working on it.  

The White Wolf


Would the bunny like this nice carrot? I don't bite. Much. :)

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-09-22 11:58 PM


Hey told ya I'd see ya here. Excellent poem. Hot out of your pen and what a dandy too. And remember dreams can become a reality.
Juls

White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
4 posted 2000-09-23 01:10 AM


Thanks.  And dreams do come true, sometimes you just have to do alittle work first.  

The White Wolf


Would the bunny like this nice carrot? I don't bite. Much. :)

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