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House of Hats |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Welcome to my House of Hats! (what city?) guess. (where y'at?) Many styles have I to choose. But they only come in shades of blue. Try this one. Here, it's interesting. It makes you laugh and helps you sing. This one holds fond memories... try it on, it sets you free. This one? It is almost black. It stinks of victim. Give that one back. That one? It is not quite teal... a soothing fit, it helps you heal. Not THAT one, for it is my last. I keep it safe behind the glass. THAT one is for my own head. I'll wear it once, when I am dead. THAT holds dread of future's past. If worn alive, you'll feel, but lack. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 09-22-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, sweet serenity, you always make me flip my lid. Hats off to ya, girl!  |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
wonderful read, thanks for accepting the challenge!  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow.... I would say that you met the challenge quite well. So many hats and so much sharing from you. You shine in your security of being you. BTW....if you like good challenges since it is evident you do..then check out the challenge forum for your next one.LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This one? It is almost black. It stinks of victim. Give that one back. That one? It is not quite teal... a soothing fit, it helps you heal. Not THAT one, for it is my last. I keep it safe behind the glass. THAT one is for my own head. I'll wear it once, when I am dead. THAT holds dread of future's past. If worn alive, you'll feel, but lack. ================== *shaking my head*..AGAIN.. damn baby... does it hurt to be this cool..(yes, i know) gawwwwd i love this poem... love the poet too... *blowing kisses to the south* me |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ You're just the greatest at that stuff ! What you can do with hats is just amazing ! I can just see you in a wide-brimmed straw hat ... sunning on the beaches of the Florida Keys ! I need a vacation BADLY .... ever been to the Keys ????? Ahhhhhh .... sipping Coca~Cola on the waterfront at Mallory Square at sunset ! To die for ! Well, maybe not die ... but close ! I liked your sassy little hats ! Love ya, gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written... enjoyed muchly... |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh this was fun. Loved it loved it. Juls |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I'm glad I entered this house. Lots of fun to read. Must make this a top hat! (click) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all, especially Blondie for the fun challenge---my brain needed the nudge...my gratitude.... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I'm with Jan on this one girlie...You are soooooo cool!!!!! I loved this!!! |
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