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Skyward Passings |
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Sunshine
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Skyward Passings Northern lass sits and sighs, looking southerly Southern lad salutes the skies, looking northerly he would be holding her in his arms, if he could she’d lay her head on his chest, if she could gazing south, she slowly wends her way through the tempered actions of her day looking north, he plods and works along in his heart he hears sweet, a distant song on eventide’s biggest star, she casts up a wish into the night winds he offers, throwing forth a kiss life’s paths crossed in time, once and then again never knowing one another, until the when… moon, shine on these two lonesome souls guide them along to their eventide shoals of long lost devotion’s remembering when fate and chance would then bring her to his arms, his kiss to her lips her head on his chest, her hand to his hip in slow dance time, a waltz under stars for all the lost lovers, wherever you are… 22 September, 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, my beautiful sister.....you do zero in on my heart with your words. I love how you write, and this one has more meaning to me than you'll ever know!! So beautiful, so real........  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny1 - you've been so prolific lately I've not been able to reply to all of your posts, but I've been reading... you've got a way with words yourself, and the duets you and Bill have been doing are marvelous... thanks for peeking in... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I think I could dance to this one all weekend long. This is superbly written and I have a new found passion for the heavens of late or couldn't you tell? Excellent penning from you exquisite quill. I think this one belongs in my library. yeppers it does |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, thanks! Great promises lie in the heavens, and by the way...your muse has been riding high lately...lovely work, yours... |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh wow Sunshine this is stunning. I was in awe as I read it. Beautiful just beautiful. Juls |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Very wistfully lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Juls, Marge, thank you, Ladies... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Lovely poem, Karilea, so sad yet the is hope there. Dee |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, Dee...never lose hope...never... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful Karilea. . . The distance is never so far that the heart doesn't feel close. . . Beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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