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Open Poetry #9

Rainbow (540th post)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-09-22 12:58 PM

Your love Is like rainbow,
After the rain leaves the sun,
Your love like a rainbow,
Your love is written in the sky,
With the so many colors In the sky,
Your love upon the sun so bright ,
You held me tight,
As skies turns Into blue,
With so many colors,
Your love is like a river
runs slowly to the sea,
Your love is a rainbow,
After the rain leaves the sun,
Your love shines
When I say I love you,
The rainbow is on the sky,
With so many colors,
The sky is filled with them,
Your love Is filled with stars
And sun burn all day long,
Your love is sweet like a flower,
Your love is enough
to fill my heart with a rainbow,

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-22 01:08 PM

The heart massaged be a rainbow...how much sweeter could it get? Wonderful thoughts of love from you today.

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

2 posted 2000-09-22 01:23 PM

Enjoyed a lot Vandana. Nicely written.
(sometime, if you don't mind, I would enjoy seeing you write a short poem in your own language and then translated into English...
just a suggestion)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-09-22 01:46 PM

VanDana~
Lovely thoughts from that little heart of yours.

I love Mike's idea ... give it a try ...
we'd love it.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-09-23 04:26 PM

Wonderful as always vandana. . . you have a gift my friend. . .

And I too would love to see a poem in your own language before you translated it. . . it would be wonderful!!!

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

5 posted 2000-09-23 04:58 PM

Beautiful poem as a Rainbow
Congratulations on your 540th post

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