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nona
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 139
Fla

0 posted 2000-09-22 09:57 AM


Validation

You used your words
like closed clinched fists.
So many times too
numerious to list.
Then you'd say you're
sorry,and want to be kissed.

But you see I don't need
your validation to know my
self worth.
God gave me that at the
time of my birth,
a fact I am afraid you missed.

You're words have no
impact anymore,cause
I am heading out the door.
I've had enough and I am tired
of keeping score.

My only hope is one day
someone,somehow will find
the cause of your rage
and you will be able to
start a new page........
...............................nona



© Copyright 2000 Nona-Madonna Neumann - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
1 posted 2000-09-22 11:16 AM


I'm sorry you have felt the pain and I hope that your new beginning will be blest.
Melton

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-09-22 01:02 PM


Hi nona,

I wish you the best, you conveyed the message so well, alot of my poetry is in the same line as this, I DO understand what you are going through and I really hope the very best, wonderful work, look forward to more.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


Trew
Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada
3 posted 2000-09-22 01:03 PM


Well said, Nona.
I hope others read these words and take heed.
Love is not unconditional when faced with fury such as this.
Very good work!

Trev.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-09-22 01:06 PM


While he is looking to start a new page you will be on to another book and I one that is a novel I have no doubt.  Wonderful read and couldn't be said any better.
nona
Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139
Fla
5 posted 2000-09-22 01:34 PM


Melton--Cerenity--Trew--Mark
Thank you for your "validation" of my work.
You see it is not I who felt the pain at all
but this is a composite of feelings I gained
from being a close observer of humankind.
I have councelled many battered souls in my work. This validates my powers of observation. Thanks for responding.....nona

PS had to add, your responses also gives me words to use for those who are feeling this pain.thank you.

[This message has been edited by nona (edited 09-22-2000).]

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
6 posted 2000-09-22 04:51 PM


Nona*
Very wise words, and now knowing the view
that you saw this through your caring way
shines through~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2000-09-22 05:07 PM


You have written one for the trouble souls...the miserable ones...they hate themselves and take it out on others that perhaps don't feel so good about themselves...people like this couldn't exist if they were immediately put into their place and told to shape up or go on their way and bother someone else...because we will not be putting up with their nonsense...the miserable ones don't care...they will not listen...they are on a mission to make everyone as miserable as they...James
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