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joy hester
Junior Member
since 2000-09-21
Posts 10


0 posted 2000-09-22 08:07 AM


If you touched me,
would I F
         A
           L
             L
like a petal heavy with
the morning's dew?
Would I tremble like a
violent volcano waiting to
ERUPT fire or would I melt
into a puddle of desire?
If I touched you-would I Dare?-
Would the guilt of these feelings be
washed away by strength in your hands?
OH< to be touched or to touch--
I don't know.



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doreen peri
Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2000-09-22 08:19 AM


well, know this...there's nothing like a little lust first thing in the morning!   this is the  first poem i read today... geez... and now i have to think about WORK!!! LOL

thanks for the read...

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-09-22 08:20 AM


joy, this is a nice post. And the answer is, nobody does until it happens.
be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

3 posted 2000-09-22 08:36 AM


I liked the analogy!    Nice poem!

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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