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Silken Sheets Satin Lies |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Silken Sheets - Satin Lies ~*Marge Tindal*~ You lay across my memory as shiny silk upon the bed Woven as the used-up threads running through my head I tuck you in so tightly then I realize these silken sheets are covered with your smooth-as-satin lies ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
MargeSatin Smooth, liquid gold hereeven with the liesKethry |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marge perfectly said...maybe it's time to get some new satin sheets...think I will go shopping today..care to join me?  ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
That was so nice with a good slap in in face. Melton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds like wash day... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
margie girl ... you rock ... (awesome color) so much sweetly said in so few perfectly chosen words ... later-sweet-silk-worm-gator jm |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Marge - Even writing of lies - your words are beautiful (I agree with Karilea) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
SO toss the damn satin sheets and go buy some Martha Stewart ones...at least they are simple home grown ones.LOL>...yeah right. Wonderful verse my friend. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
wonderful Marge...this is an appropriate poem for me right now..says so much in so few words..  |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Hun, I prefer Ralph Lauren (so crispy, and never come untucked)....have a DAMN YARD SALE and throw those sheets on some table for 50 cents *hugs* ~Heather |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The softest touch brings the deepest hurt at times....so tender and sad Marge~ |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
WOW! This really packs a punch.........so much said in so few lines. Great read. Jenn E |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--just give me cotton...cotton never lies. Great poem |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
marge- silky satin words here. love this. love, vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge those lies will do it everytime. Very well penned, and beautifully presented. Take care. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Thank you. Glad you liked ! Maureen~ Have you EVER known a woman to turn down a shopping spree ? I'm there ! ! Melton~ Hmmm ! No slap intended ! Just shaking the sheets ! Karilea~ Yesterday's dirt - tomorrow's laundry ! JanetMarie~ Thanks gal. You get paroled to do the laundry ? Wilfred~ Thank you. You ARE smooth-as-silk ! MarkB~ You do Martha ... now that IS homely .. er .. homey ! I'll slip into something satin ! Victoria~ Well, sounds like the laundromat is gonna be crowded ! Thank you. Heather~ Oh, yeah ! On the table right next to Monica's DRESS !  LOL ! JennE~ Glad you liked it. Martie~ Oh ... I can see the new slogan now - Cotton - The Fabric Of Your Lie ! Vicky~ Glad - really glad you caught it. Thank you. Marsha~ Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you, MArge, for putting LongJohn in his place with this beautiful poem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ LOL ! Yeah ..... how dare he ! ? ! LOL ! I just love you !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
singing you praises once again and leaving you something special in the "CHALLENGE" forum .lol...need someone to start it and you look just like the one to do it.  SORRY MARGE......I think it has been retired or something....it was one that Sunny1 sent me of a cowboy singing with a coyote under the moon. Dont know why it isnt working. It was earlier. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Lies leave such nasty stains. Sounds like a job for SHOUT! Enjoyed your words, the flow ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I am really taken with this one Marge, to say that it was short, sweet, and to the point would be too much of an over simplification. Fabulous work! I loved it. Bye the way, belated congratulations on reaching your 10,000th. An outstanding effort! Your heart and soul shows through in your work, I hope too be around to see much more of your work. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ You're just a super kinda guy ! Chanson~ Whoa ! Is it on sale ? EagleOne~ I thank you so much for your comments. Congratulations appreciated. Hope to be here for a long time too ! Hard to believe it's been only 10 months ! Seems like it's been forever within this family of friends. Denise~ Thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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