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Caballero
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since 2000-09-15
Posts 10
Seattle, Washington

0 posted 2000-09-22 03:30 AM


I'll love you til forever babe...
take my hand
and we'll dance
bounds of fantasy
quenching hungers
seizing passions
furious and beautiful
like clouds
atop the mountains
yielding to
warm breaths of
beckoning sun
licked along our
faces...

laughing
chasing endless
rainbows
to wet
our brushes
painting dreams
amidst our lips
kissing scents
of all the
flowers
passed

Will you love me til forever babe?
Its a place
upon the map
held folded
and hidden
between our hands...

the path has
an end if we
want to see it...

hold me in your
arms always
closer
shut your eyes
with me
and we'll
fail...

miserably

beautifully

together...

blinded
with love...

lost within
dreams...

never
finding
the place
called
forever.

--Caballero(Christopher Fleming)


© Copyright 2000 Christopher Fleming - All Rights Reserved
Dee
Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2000-09-22 06:50 AM


Caballero, beautiful words put together so well.
Dee

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-09-22 08:45 PM


I like this very much!  
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-09-22 09:52 PM


a big, serene sigh to you! This was intense.
Loved it.  very, very nice....ooh.

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