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Our Love
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Our Love |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
Let us walk together side by side Never in front of or behind Let us feed off of each other's love A gift sent from heaven above I intrust you with my heart Trust being the key part I will always be forgiving Living each day, as if it were Thanksgiving I commit my mind, body and soul As my love is unconditional Love is like a rose It needs to be nurtured to make it grow I will be whatever you need For your love lives deep inside of me Passion, understanding and communication play a part In keeping love strong in your heart Our love is growing day by day I promise you to never walk away I am here for as long as you will let me stay. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Very nice feelings. If I were your special someone. I would let you stay for a long time. Nice job Keep it up |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Hi Cheryl! As this is the first poem of yours that I have read, let me say,"Welcome to Passions!". This is a very sincere piece, full of love and devotion. I hope the feeling lasts in your heart forever. Hope to see you around the forums! Trev. |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
Thank you very much Alan.I find it hard to convey what I feel in my heart as it never seems to be enough to express what I really feel. Thank you Trev.My heart is so full that I can't imagine it being any other way. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like a heart in full blossom. Don't it feel good? Lovely write from you. |
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