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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-09-21 07:26 AM



Fairy Tales Can Come True....

It's not easy loving you
Maybe that's the "why I do"
Anticipating each moment, you are near.

Awaiting sight of you
Dreams to real, come true
Awakening the "Sleeping Beauty" here.

Times together shared
Never enough dared
Wanting more, a never ending need.

Moments of treasured hold
Kissed by lips of gold
A "Once Upon" on each, we both shall feed.

A fairy tale come true
It's not easy loving you
But worth the tender touches then received.

Maybe thats the "why I do"
Wanting only to be with you
Threads of golden memories together weaved.

If I were going to need you
Share the loving moments true
I'd wish a "Cinderella" midnight dance.

The fullness of the moon
Would lend a glowing tune
We'd live happily forever, given "chance".


Maureen
9*2k




[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-21-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Alan
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1 posted 2000-09-21 08:39 AM


Very nice read. I have always liked fairy tales. Dreams are good too. I look forward to reading more.
Kethry
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2 posted 2000-09-21 08:46 AM


Maureen,
fairy tales can come true
and pure passion can shine through
there is laughter beyond your blue
In this I send my praise to you
*HuGS* for this.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-09-21 09:32 PM


Alan ...yes i think  fairy tales can  come true..with a little help...
thank you for reading today
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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4 posted 2000-09-21 09:33 PM


Kethry

always love a poetic response..and yes I am trying to  be in a lighter mood today...thank you
~~soft hugs
Maureen

CAMERON UNDERWOOD
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5 posted 2000-09-22 12:20 PM


Very nicley written.
I loved it.
Sometimes love can be hard, but you must endure.  For they are your passion in life.
As you two become one.

Best wishes

Sleepless in Portland


Victoria
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6 posted 2000-09-22 01:03 PM


As long as they dont end in a nightmare
as mine has ..and you know all about that.
nice write as always M

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-09-22 02:12 PM


Sleepless in Portland

is that anything like "Sleepless in Seattle" I loved that movie..and everything about it...
~~soft thanks for  your  kind words
Maureen
*sleepless in  southern PA (doesnt quite have the same  ring to it)  

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-22-2000).]

MMoonchild
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8 posted 2000-09-22 02:14 PM


I've lived my share of nightmares, Victoria and most of them  recently
thanks, hon...I appreciate you and your visit...and hope for better times to come your way
~~soft hugs
Maureen

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2000-09-22 04:05 PM


Hi Maureen,
This is lovely, and I loved reading it. I finally had a little break from work to stop by, and I'm glad that I did. Hope things are well with you.

Bill

MMoonchild
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10 posted 2000-09-22 09:48 PM


Hi Bill...things are  up and down  and inside out at times..but I go with the flow as you can see in my words...I think I am calm enough  to read your tale  this weekend and give you my opinion...thanks for being so patient...these past two weeks have  driven me a bit crazy..and I am trying to have some control here..*it's a bit tough when you have to compete with youth and beauty  
~~soft smiles
Maureen

kaile
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11 posted 2000-09-22 10:40 PM


Moonchild, i enjoyed the unique perspective of this poem and the soft, dreamy feel it leaves this reader with
MMoonchild
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12 posted 2000-09-23 02:15 AM


kaile

thank you...it isn't always easy to love...but without it where would we all be...
~~soft smiles
Maureen

Dee
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13 posted 2000-09-23 06:57 AM


Maureen, this is lovely, dreams are a wonderful thing.
Don't forget you are beautiful on the inside AS WELL.

Dee

Mark Bohannan
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14 posted 2000-09-23 07:04 AM


Not all fairy tales end in "and they lived happily ever after", but that doesn't meant that they weren't worth living.  Wonderful write from you as usual
Temptress
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15 posted 2000-09-25 03:36 AM


A midnight dance sounds wonderful. Here's hoping one day you will have it. Wonderful work. Thanks for taking the challenge.

My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.

MMoonchild
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16 posted 2000-09-25 12:03 PM


Dee
Mark
Temptress..thank  you all for responding to this poem..I am a little behind on reponses to mine and also to responding to others and I  apologize for that..I AM reading  but sometimes I don't have the words to  reply at the moment..I am just absorbing the  wonderful poems and trying to feel what you all are expressing
~~soft hugs and thanks
Maureen

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