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Michat
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since 2000-09-21
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0 posted 2000-09-21 02:19 AM




If I were going to need you

Be the touch of fingertip
Igniting passionate fires

Be the everlasting kiss
Soaring spirits high

Be the love divine and true
Embracing heart a coveted jewel

Be the mind of reason
Guiding when bewildered and confused

Be the eyes of compassion
Penetrating beneath surface seeing beauty everlasting

Be the friend understand and accept
Growing together having no regrets.






[This message has been edited by Michat (edited 09-21-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Michat - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-09-21 06:45 AM


Michat,
welcome to passions, if I were going to need you, it would be through your beautiful poetry.
Be well
Kethry

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2000-09-21 06:48 AM


This is a lovely piece - Welcome to Passions - It's a wonderful place where those who need  and offer friendship abound - Check your email for a special greeting..
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-09-21 07:03 AM


Welcome to Passions and answering a challenge on your first post.....what a brave one you are.  Wonderful job in doing so I might add.  Great write.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-21-2000).]

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715
PA
4 posted 2000-09-22 05:27 AM


Well... I must say I have read this several times and enjoyed it each time....just Be and continue writing for all to enjoy...we need such beautiful thoughts in our lives....
~~soft smiles and Welcome
Maureen

Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2000-09-22 06:36 AM


Michat, Welcome to Passions. I know you'll like it here, everyone else does! What a lovely poem to start with.
Dee

linda munday
Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia
6 posted 2000-09-22 07:35 AM


Hello there,
Welcome to Passions in Poetry.
This is a truly lovely poem... and I think you have met the challenge very well.
And if this is a small sample of your work, then we are all in for a treat or two in the future.
Linda Munday  

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
7 posted 2000-09-25 03:47 AM


WOW! Welcome, welcome, welcome!!   You touched upon the mood of the challenge nicely.

My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
8 posted 2000-09-25 03:49 AM


WOW! Welcome, welcome, welcome!!   You touched upon the mood of the challenge nicely.

My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.

Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
9 posted 2000-09-25 03:19 PM


well done and welcome!


Corinne

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
10 posted 2000-09-26 08:31 AM


Nicely done with your first challenge, I really like the format! Welcome to passions, may you grow to love it here as much as I do!
Debbie

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