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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2000-09-21 01:51 AM


Left to lonely
left unknowing
a theft of comfort's vagrant wind...
to love only--
a seed ungrowing--
Fortuna cast her wicked spin.
Soma, too abandons me.
Adrift, adrift in my bereave...
Laughter of the Gods I seek.
Adrift adrift remorseless sea...

Pandora opened up the box--
but does a gift come wrapped in locks?
Lovely love, in luscious lie,
I opened box to crawl inside,
and then Hope, too, abandoned me.

O pleasure of sweet company--
where now are the Gods that weep?



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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
1 posted 2000-09-21 06:16 AM


Joining you in this "bad mood" my
friend...you write ache with the ink of the
soul here me friend~ ((hugs)) Love ya!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-09-21 07:54 AM


but your so cute when your in a bad mood...
stomping around in the forums...
just remember what I said...
your muse is just resting up...
shes gonna need it...
two words... tool belt ..(hehe)
SMILE BABY      
*winkiewinkie*  
me loves ya...even when your cranky  
(me not scared of you...)
(me knows some "wrastlin" moves of me own) LOL
me thinks its time for that slumber party...
butterfly will bring the pizza(boy) hahah
and I'll bring the party favors   LOL
and CHOCOLATE ...lots of chocolate ...
RASPBERRY TEA TOO!!!!!!      
LAAAWWDY...LOOK OUT NAW ORLANS...
*kisskiss*
smiling yet me sweet?????????
ROTFLMAO

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-09-21 08:46 AM


Gotta thank God for butterflies!!!

Thanks for the smiles this morning, god knows I needed them...and didn't mean to worry ya'll none...and as for the Pizza boy...is that (piece of boy?)  well, no matter, nothing but the crust when we are done...*winks*  and JM---just downloaded "Walkin' To New Orleans" in your honor!!!  Love ya both!

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
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honolulu, hawaii
4 posted 2000-09-21 08:52 AM


fortuna cast her wicked spin.
as uasual in the depths of your moment you have brougjhr me to my self in a simple spin of words, so out standing.
kindly,' angrybraids

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
5 posted 2000-09-21 02:21 PM



"pizza boy"...that would be
singular...ohhhhhhhhhhhhh that would never
do  a "six pack" perhaps???  and none of that 30
minutes or less stuff...I'm splurging for the
works         Only the best for this
party...lmao!!!



[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 09-21-2000).]

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
6 posted 2000-09-21 02:39 PM


O pleasure of sweet company--
where now are the Gods that weep?

WOW Serenity, amazing poem. oh big HUG
my friend let's get out those chocolates and a few videos and have a slumber party.. yippee  

My view stretches out from the fence to the wall No words could explain, no actions determine Just watching the trees and the leaves as they fall:Joy

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