navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #9 » Perfect Night
Open Poetry #9
Post A Reply Post New Topic Perfect Night Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
kat
Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387


0 posted 2000-09-20 10:16 PM


Perfect Night

Drizzled sky of stars
Peaceful serenity
Lets make this night ours
Passions ecstasy

Glittering jewels in our eyes
Our souls shine through
Spellbound we fantasize
Of me and you

Breathless kisses of fire
Beating hearts race
Winded breaths between
Bodies embrace

Immersed in desire’s flame
Souls ablaze
In bliss and in love
Each other we gaze

Whispering words of love
To one another we do
Tonight nothing matters but us
My love
I’m so in love with you



© Copyright 2000 kat - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-09-20 10:17 PM


Sigh ... Kat, this is so lovely! Beautifully and so passionately written, well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

kat
Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

2 posted 2000-09-20 11:58 PM


Kit:  Thank-you! I'm glad you like it!  

kat

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-09-21 04:46 AM


Wonderfully passionate
straight from the heart...well done
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


English Rose
Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211
Berkshire, England
4 posted 2000-09-21 05:16 AM



OOOOhhhhhh I am getting chills from this one kat!  Yummy!!!!!

kat
Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387

5 posted 2000-09-21 07:06 AM


Tracie:  Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it  

English Rose: I'm glad it had that effect on you. Thanks!  

kat

insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

6 posted 2000-09-22 08:06 PM


I LOVE YOU TOO
MysticalNights
Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112
Oklahoma
7 posted 2000-10-25 01:13 AM


kat-   Simply beautiful.  Loved it!
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #9 » Perfect Night

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary