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Anonymous
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0 posted 2000-09-20 06:52 PM


Cameron has a broken heart
while Mark's is high on love.
White Dove's inspiration
comes from the Lord above.
Long John's kicking kitties
while X Angel aims at men.
In amongst the riot
is the romantic soul of Sven.
Pandora searches for Long John
to bury him in kitty litter.
Maureen happily looks forward,
not one to remain bitter.
Melissa's mastered haikus
and Sudhir's perfected the art.
Auguste opens up his soul
and shows us all his heart.
Kethry's poem on navel lint
really was a scream.
Wilfred and his sonnets
sets every girl to dream.
JM will keep posting
when the warden's out of sight.
Butterflies will always send us
into raptures of delight.
Brian's in all our hearts,
him and his sweet lady friend.
May God give them the strength
not to break, just to bend.
Last but by no means least
comes our patron, Ron,
who generously gives his pages
for us to write upon.
So many poets here
their hopes and dreams to share,
but most of all they show us
how much they really care.

*****************

This is my thank you to Passions, but do you know who I am?

© Copyright 2000 Anonymous - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-20 06:57 PM


yeppers.... I believe I do ...thanks for the mention, but then again maybe not.  MMMM let me think about it a bit.     Style, pattern and cadence of course "color"....well about 90% sure.

Now of course what would you expect a cowboy to say....

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-20-2000).]

X Angel
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2 posted 2000-09-20 07:04 PM


aww shucks *toe in dirt* I was only playin!
I like men I do!! (smothered in BBQ sauce over a grill that is *wink*)

and uhmm nope I'm not sure who you are...lemme think on it a bit  

pandora
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3 posted 2000-09-20 07:18 PM


puuuurrrrrrfectly FURvent!

where is that wascally longjohn anyway... lemme at him!  

thanks for mentioning l'il ol' me... i'm not around here much... and no, i don't know who you are... you're ANONYMOUS!!! hehe *wink*

(hey xangel, remember when we played this same "who wrote it" game at that other yellow/orange looking site a long time ago? *g... what FUN!)

loved this, Anonymous! great job with the poem!      

beware pandora's box...



X Angel
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4 posted 2000-09-20 07:59 PM


LOL Pandora darlin.....'cept here we have a ZILLION poets to choose from, there was so much smaller and easier to catch someone by their writing style LOL. I, myself, got caught frequently!
But yes it twas a hoot!

~Heather

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5 posted 2000-09-20 08:02 PM


I enjoyed this....I've thought of a poem like this but didn't have the courage or the talent to do so....well done.

Michael


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-09-20 08:11 PM


Don't know who you are, but you sure know your poets ... nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Anonymous
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7 posted 2000-09-20 09:04 PM


Mark, color can be like a rainbow. You see something but if you try to touch - it dissappears.

X Angel,
Its good to have some fun
(that LJ deserves it too)
We all need a smile, so
keep doin' what you do.
(Just watch out for heartburn)

Pandora, its not how often you're here, its the impression you leave behind.

        

Anonymous
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8 posted 2000-09-20 09:06 PM


Michael, you are too modest. I know these things, I have read you work.

Kit, I read a lot!

Elizabeth
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9 posted 2000-09-20 09:10 PM


I have no idea who you are, but I sure liked your poem!  

Elizabeth

Nan
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10 posted 2000-09-20 09:12 PM


I know where you're from!!!..
Anonymous
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11 posted 2000-09-20 09:13 PM


Thank you Elizabeth. I haven't been here long so I'm not surprised you don't know who I am.
Anonymous
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12 posted 2000-09-20 09:16 PM


So Nan, where am I from?
Nan
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13 posted 2000-09-20 09:19 PM


Check your email...
WhtDove
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14 posted 2000-09-20 09:23 PM


I'm quite surprised to be mentioned!
Thank you!
I'm am unsure as well. Hmmmn, have some ideas, but will have to think this one over  

Oh what the heck, I'll say it....Kethry!!??

Anonymous
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15 posted 2000-09-20 09:27 PM


Love the innocent look, Nan. Thanks for the email!!!
Anonymous
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16 posted 2000-09-20 09:29 PM


WhiteDove, I am down south, but not that far.
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
17 posted 2000-09-20 09:31 PM


Karilea is that you?????  If not then I would guess .....Deb....yeah that is it .... Deb tis you tis it not?  Karilea...sorry but I don't think it is you.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-20-2000).]

Anonymous
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18 posted 2000-09-20 09:34 PM


Nope!
Elizabeth
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19 posted 2000-09-20 09:40 PM


Down South? Umm...Temptress? PoetFemmeFatale? Now you really have me wondering...

Elizabeth

Nan
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20 posted 2000-09-20 09:42 PM


Further south than that, I'm sure...
Chanson
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21 posted 2000-09-20 09:56 PM


Ahhh, a lovely tribute indeed.
What a thoughtful gesture  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
22 posted 2000-09-20 09:58 PM


Care for some Rocky Road or peanut butter fudge?????
Anonymous
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23 posted 2000-09-20 10:04 PM


I'm pleased you liked my little poem, Chanson.

Mark, icecream isn't my thing but offer me a Scarf and I may hand you a key.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
24 posted 2000-09-20 10:20 PM


So would a white feather do??? or should we just do the rainbow.......yeppers.....now you are busted my friend of color.



[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-20-2000).]

Wilfred Yeats
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25 posted 2000-09-20 10:44 PM


A great poem - and I am flattered to be mentioned - but I must say this - one of the more significant reasons I 'joined" this forum was the confidence that there would be NO  anon posters - i'm forced to believe ayou must be a moderator - taking unfair advantage of priviledge
Denise
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26 posted 2000-09-20 10:47 PM


...I think I know, I think I know!! Can I take a guess, or shall we let the suspense build awhile longer? (assuming that I guess correctly, that is!)

Denise

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
27 posted 2000-09-20 10:54 PM


insect you may come out now....really funny you....

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kat
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28 posted 2000-09-20 11:26 PM


Very cute! LOL
I tend to agree with Mark. I think you're busted. Color can be like a rainbow hmmmm?
I wonder who did that poem?
Yep! I have a feeling you're insect also. I love your sense of humor. LOL  

kat

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
29 posted 2000-09-20 11:39 PM


yep...rainbows, white scarf and white reply and of course leading in the dance just as a gentleman should.  Enjoyed and feeling mighty blonde that it took me so long.  GREAT ONE.....loved the challenge now back to reading and replying.
Anonymous
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30 posted 2000-09-20 11:42 PM


Mark, I'm not big on feathers, sorry. Insects aren't my thing, either.

Wilfred, This Anon is a once off for me. Thought it would be fun for all. And no I'm not a moderator.

Denise, hit me with your best shot!

Kat, I haven't read that one, maybe I should.


ggrn3
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31 posted 2000-09-20 11:43 PM


Anonymous
  This was a great tribute to the peots here at passions, those you mentioned anyway.  You have everyone wondering who you are.  Some think they know.  Why don't you unveil yourself.  I'm just so curious.  They say curiosity killed the cat, and this is one cat who's dying of curiosity.

Garfield

Anonymous
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32 posted 2000-09-20 11:49 PM


Garfield, it was not my intention to leave anyone out, you are all wonderful poets. I think I would be thrown out if I mentioned all of you.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
33 posted 2000-09-20 11:54 PM


okay then greeneyes it is
Anonymous
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34 posted 2000-09-21 12:14 PM


Did I ever tell you, I love cowboys! They don't let go of somethings until they get it right. Keep hangin' on Mark!
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
35 posted 2000-09-21 12:15 PM


okay Victoria then this is my last attempt tonight...how is that...satisfied NOW.
Anonymous
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36 posted 2000-09-21 12:19 PM


OK guys I've had my fun. Thank you all for joining in.

With this poem
I’ve had a ball,
but the time has come
to tell you all.
First I’ll say
about my jest,
I think you are
the very best.
So now I have to
drop a name,
and put an end
to my game.
Thanks to those
Who played with me,
I wish you the best,
Your new friend, Dee

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
37 posted 2000-09-21 12:30 PM


Thank you Dee.....it was fun and yeah....cowboy was stumped.  LOVED IT THOUGH
Dee
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38 posted 2000-09-21 02:46 AM


Glad you enjoyed it, Mark. I needed a bit of cheering up after my last couple of posts.
Thanks again, all.
Dee

Kethry
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39 posted 2000-09-21 04:04 AM


Dee, sorry I missed the guessing.
first I guessed Isis then I did guess it was you simply because of the naval lint thing. However I did get a lot of cryptic emails that I now understand. thanks for that. And thanks for the post. i really enjoyed the style of it.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

tracie66
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40 posted 2000-09-21 04:22 AM


Dee this was fun, kept me guessing and I had no idea.
well done to a great bit of fun
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


Nan
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41 posted 2000-09-21 06:57 AM


Well now - This was just as fun as it could Dee.... and fun is what we're about here - nice job, Ms-Anon...
kat
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42 posted 2000-09-21 07:14 AM


Dee: This was great! I had no clue at all. Good thing you revealed yourself because in my mind I was almost 100% sure it was someone else on here. Like I said earlier. I love a great sense of humor and that's something you sure do have. Thanks for the fun!  

kat

2dalimit
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43 posted 2000-09-21 08:05 AM


Now that was a lot of fun. This is what this forum is all about- the circle of friends.
Thank you,
Melton

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44 posted 2000-09-21 08:05 AM


Thank you Dee
for mentioning me..
I held off on replying this way

I was trying to guess
And I felt such duress
That I gave up and read other's say

Believe me I thought
it was another that wrought
these words of such fun, what a treat

Now that you've exposed
who you are, I've proposed
A toast to a poet thats "sweet".

Thank you again...it did tax my mind  yesterday and I had to take a peek to see if anyone had guessed by this morning  
~~soft hugs
Maureen

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45 posted 2000-09-21 12:22 PM


I thought that I would ne'er see
A poet as Anonymous as thee
But when I read that you had mentioned me
I would have ne'er thought that it could be Dee!

To be mentioned in this poem so sweet
Shows me that you've done quite a feat
As I read it here in this seat
I thought that it was really neat!

So to you Dee, I write these lines
And thank you my friend for a poem so fine.

Thanks Dee for mentioning me. . . I consider it an honor to be included among such company. . . this is great!!!  

------------------------------------------------------



That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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46 posted 2000-09-21 01:03 PM


funny.  
brian madden
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47 posted 2000-09-21 01:39 PM


Hi Dee wonderful poem, I know I keep saying I am leaving but I am still taking a back sit and will pop by when I can. But college and love are taking up my time... my lady friend.. hmmm little boyish grin.  

My view stretches out from the fence to the wall No words could explain, no actions determine Just watching the trees and the leaves as they fall:Joy

Dee
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48 posted 2000-09-21 03:42 PM


Thank you all, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just love a good joke.
Thanks for keeping my secret Michael!
And now I think Anonymous has retired.
Dee

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49 posted 2000-09-21 06:51 PM


Dee,

This was great!! What a response you received to this one...great joke and lots of fun for everyone, and you're most welcome, dear friend...

Love,
Michael


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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Denise
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50 posted 2000-09-21 08:58 PM


hehehehe....I was sure it was someone else entirely too! Glad I didn't guess before you revealed the truth! This was fun, Dee!

Denise

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51 posted 2000-09-22 08:43 AM


I'm a bit late with my welcome, O Anonymous Dee...but it thrills me as it does the other that through your readings you've come to know so many of us!

Now, we hope to see some more of your poetic wit!  [ummm, you don't kick kitties do you?]

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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