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Kit McCallum
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0 posted 2000-09-20 02:23 PM


A Portrait of a Mother's Love

In rocking chair, by candle light,
With shadows drawn across the night,
A vision of angelic form,
Beheld my eyes this wondrous morn.

A gentle motion to and fro,
Held mesmerized, my gaze aglow;
As lullabies were sweetly sung,
To mother's breast, the infant clung.

Enfolded tenderly in arms,
I watched, enraptured, by their charms;
For in the candle's light above,
'Twas portrait of a mother's love.

A wisp of hair fell 'cross her face,
Head tilted slightly, bowed in grace;
With lilting voice, she sweetly crooned,
As infant suckled, there in tune.

The heartbeats of the two entwined,
As if to perfect rhythm, chimed;
There, bathed in warmth of body heat,
While gently rocked, their souls did meet.

By candle's light, these angels shone,
Sweet miracle of sacred bond.

/Kit McCallum


[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 09-21-2000).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-09-20 02:26 PM


And an absolutely beautiful post as well...

Ah Kit, anyone told you lately how talented you are?

LngJhnAg
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2 posted 2000-09-20 02:30 PM


Kit,  Lorelei is going to LOVE this poem.  It is absolutely Cassatt in every stroke you painted here.  Beautiful and emotional.  You wrote this poem perfectly!
Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-09-20 02:47 PM


Congratulations on the 3000!!!



Now this is so beautiful that I must offer my applause to you and bow graciously and to help you celebrate such a marvelous milestone I have a litte challenge for you!!!!!   Knew you would like that!!  HAHAHAHA...chuckling loudly as I hear you scream.


Poet pens
passionate
posts per
perplexity
pounding
pon pearls
As anxiety
answers
anxious
ahhhhhhhs
and allowing
another aliteration
Challenge
captures cherished
courses containing
cumlative
comings continued
chance
Flow free
for fellow
friends fondly
frolicking
from feathered
feelings




Enjoy and celebrate wildly my friend.  I know you just love the pressure.

BSC
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4 posted 2000-09-20 03:37 PM


And what a beautiful portrait it is Kit.  I could picture this as if I were standing right in front of it.  A simply lovely piece.  Bonnie

               CONGRATULATIONS ON 3,000!!!



[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 09-20-2000).]

Corinne
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5 posted 2000-09-20 03:38 PM


How beautiful and heart felt this poem is!


Corinne

Dee
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6 posted 2000-09-20 04:19 PM


Kit, you have set the scene so well I can see it.
******Congrats on 3000******

Dee

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2000-09-20 04:34 PM


You have shown the tenderness of a mothers love so well...a lovely 3000...James
Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-09-20 04:44 PM


~Karilea: Smiling here … no, they haven't Karilea, but you just did, and I thank you from the bottom of this heart! Very much appreciated these kind words!    

~LngJhn~ Ahhh … Mary Cassatt, beautiful impressionist she was … lovely work, I'll take this response as a wonderful compliment LngJhn, thank you, for I do so love to paint with both oils and the pen, sigh … Now I'm no Cassatt, but here's a few I have painted, hope you and Lorelei enjoy!:
http://www.geocities.com/Heartland/Hills/5407/amain.html

~Bonnie:  What a beautiful reply Bonnie, it means a lot to me that this came across as intended, thank you so much!    

~Corinne:  Thank you so much for this lovely response Corinne, I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece!    

~Dee:  I'm so glad this painted a picture to you Dee, thank you for saying so, much appreciated!    

~James: Thank you so much for these words James, I am very grateful you enjoyed!    

~Mark:  Aha … dear Mark, you're making me smile. Thank you so much for the lovely applause, and now my dear friend …

***

Mark mischievously
makes mystic mazes
merrily mesmerizing
my mellow mind
To try tantalizingly
to tempt test trial tidbits
to torture
As alliteration
artfully arrives
arousing amicable alliance
absorbing altruistic attempts
Penned perhaps profoundly
per pedantry play
perilously pronouncing proclivity
She shrugs shoulders shyly
Shuffling shame
Shadow shallowly shaking.

Much appreciation to all,
/Kit



[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 09-20-2000).]

CocoBaci
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9 posted 2000-09-20 04:52 PM


hi KIT,

Firstly I must compliment you on such an exquisite write of a bond which you have penned so well...

Secondly, I extend my heartfelt congrats 2 your 3,0000th and CHEERS2U for many more

Dani

Denise
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10 posted 2000-09-20 08:56 PM


Absolutely lovely, Kit! Congratulations on 3,000!! Way to go!!

Denise

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11 posted 2000-09-20 09:01 PM


Kit

You are absolutely marvelous and certainly deserve a great big HUG!  Congrats on your 3000.  Your work is outstanding.

                     didi

Elizabeth
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12 posted 2000-09-20 09:03 PM


Kit, that was gorgeous. You painted a beautiful portrait of mother and child. Wonderful work.

Elizabeth

Lone Wolf
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13 posted 2000-09-20 09:08 PM


Kit,

This was a beautiful portrait of a mother's love my friend.  A wonderful post for your 3000th!!!!!  

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!  HERE IS TO  3000 MORE!!!!!!!                          

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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14 posted 2000-09-20 09:11 PM


Kit--there is so much power in this bond between mother and child and you have painted it with perfect words that touched my heart...Congratulations on the 3000
Alwye
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15 posted 2000-09-20 10:35 PM


Congrats on 3000 my friend!  This is so tender and touching...I work with infants and I know how precious they are.  Wonderful work!  

*Krista Knutson*

"Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious

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16 posted 2000-09-20 10:48 PM


Kit.....congrats on the 3000. Others have reached it but not in the style you have. You have my utmost admiration, Kit  
LngJhnAg
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17 posted 2000-09-20 11:25 PM


Kit - I especially love your stills - thank you for sending me there.
tracie66
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18 posted 2000-09-21 04:13 AM


Kit~
This poem is absolutely beautiful, I think it is a wonderful portrait of a mothers love..well done
Tracie~
CONGRATULATIONS ON REACHING 3,000 POSTS  


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Nan
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19 posted 2000-09-21 07:21 AM


KUDOS!




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20 posted 2000-09-21 07:51 AM


Kit~
Your paintings, whether by word or brush
leaves a soft hummingbird hover across our hearts.


*This painting is a lovely piece of your talent.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



brian madden
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21 posted 2000-09-21 02:52 PM


Kit Congrads on the 3000th post, a very beautiful poem very tender and a perfect verse to mark this milestone.



My view stretches out from the fence to the wall No words could explain, no actions determine Just watching the trees and the leaves as they fall:Joy

Kit McCallum
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22 posted 2000-09-23 03:52 PM


Thank you so much for all the wonderful replies everyone, I very much appreciate all of the lovely and kind words (and the beautiful pictures   )

With much appreciation to all,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 09-23-2000).]

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