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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-09-20 01:47 PM




~LOVE'S LAMBADA TANKA~

5-7-5-7-7


All night lambada
electric touch upon fiery skin
service me splendour
taste and explore my essence
bodies entwined create love

*By Melissa Honeybee*


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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1 posted 2000-09-20 01:51 PM


Ooh la la .. this sensual dance flowed into your words perfectly, nicely penned Melissa!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
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2 posted 2000-09-20 02:07 PM


Melissa, girl you give good tanka....  

Parker

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-09-20 02:34 PM


Dancing through with heartfelt smiles.  Beautifully penned.
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2000-09-21 08:22 AM


Tanks for the tanka,
that's one style I'm going to have to play with.
Be well
Kethry.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

rosepetals25
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5 posted 2000-09-21 08:55 AM


Melissa,

   I just looooove tankas    And I like this sensual poem.

                           rp25

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