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Candlelight Kisses |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Written with my good friend Mike candlelight kisses whisper in the night sweet caresses of silent soft token fragrance of roses,a lovers delight all senses bloom, buds yet unbroken my love for you, deeper than words spoken too much to share, you alone I invite raging is a river in the depths of my soul my blood beating rapids out of control rising from high tide and moonlight together like seagull wings in stormy weather the wind tangos within the beach heather each zepher lifts our kindred spirits sailing emotions on rafts made of wishes mere shadows of love and candlelight kisses [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Victoria and Mike! This is a very flowing and sweetly romantic verse ... a lovely collaboration. Nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much Kit..Mike and I appreciate your kind words. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Victoria, very very nice. Loved that last line. Parker |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
very nicely written, Victoria. I like the flow, and the consistency in the theme and progress. You must have had fun writing this. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
each zepher lifts our kindred spirits sailing emotions on rafts made of wishes mere shadows of love and candlelight kisses Wonderful writing by you and Mike. Lovely verse all the way through but especially the last three lines. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I would have to agree with Mark, those last three lines are wonderful. Well done, Victoria. Dee |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much everyone..yes I had fun writing with Mike..We wrote it on icq together and was a bit tired last night while doing it..ha ha..appreciate all of you peeking in. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Victoria and Mike, this is lovely, perfectly romantic images of love. catalinamoon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you catalinamoon...and for stopping by glad you enjoyed.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ I certainly enjoyed the visions in these verses. Nicely done from you and Mike. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you two - wrote for me and for many here - (wittingly or unwitttingly) and I must thank you I especially liked: "the wind tangos within the beach heather" beautiful words from you both didn't even notice the transition from quintain to triolets until I reread ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Marge and Wil. So glad you enjoyed. Thanks for peeking in.. |
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