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CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

0 posted 2000-09-20 01:52 AM

CRAYONS

C olorful expression in rainbow hues
R evealing joys and sorrows of two
A heart and soul soon entwine
Y ou and she color outside the lines
O nly beholding pearlized tints
N urturing love through togetherness
S haring a bond forever in life.

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 09-20-2000).]

redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

1 posted 2000-09-20 02:14 AM

totally sweet reflection of being a parent, this reminded me of my friend Makayla.

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-09-20 02:36 AM

Dani~
I have always loved crayons ...
the greatest invention.

Inclined to color a little outside the lines myself !

Enjoyed this acrostic.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2000-09-20 02:41 AM

Coco....
You are so good!!!!!!!! This is so happy and full of color!!
Loved it, but then again, I always did love crayons.....still do!!!

< !signature-->

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-20-2000).]

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2000-09-20 12:55 PM

REDHEART...thank you for breezing thru this lil rhyme and I appreciate your comments

MARGE...happy to read that you liked this and I concur it's healthy for our spirit to sometimes color outside the lines

SUNNY1...you touch many a heart with the verses you write and I thank you once again reading my rhyme

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-09-20 01:10 PM

Oh Coco ... this is a wonderful acrostic! Very nicely done, with such tender sentiments. I really enjoyed this!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2000-09-20 01:31 PM

this was wonderful..loved it..

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